Reviews for True Allegiance
sailormewmewinuluver chapter 13 . 3/10/2014
i prefer this version to the new one. please keep the plot sort of like this one
Lucyole chapter 10 . 10/16/2012
your story is very interesting and good again a future child for usagi this
time a boy i thought the lunarian royal race coulndt bear boys just girls
becuase of that serenety crap ant the ginzuishou (silver cristal) whatever
i like that its funny and i'm happy it isnt darien she is with want to kill that
guy whenever he appaers i mena he is weak doesnt have any powers just throw a damn rose and than leave what the hell vegeta is much more
stronger and cooler even with that crazy hear of his*lol* please write
more chapters i would be very happy about that vote Gohan and hotaru (i just love her she is my fav senshi) *gives you delicous cookies for
your muse so that she bring you lots of fantastic ideas for new chapters*
bad girl 61 chapter 13 . 11/27/2009
please add more chapters
Princess Moonie of the Moon chapter 13 . 6/3/2009

u have 2 continue this version!'its so good!

and i really want to see and Usa/Veggie romance :(

everyone else that's tried writing an Usa/veggie romance have given up before they even got together :( :(

please ibeg of you... CONTINUE!
nequam-tenshi chapter 13 . 4/22/2009
Life is hard to the point that you want to give it up. The world may turn on you but the world will give you a chance-a chance for a new. You can take it or you cannot. Sometimes the hardest thing in life is to live. *sad smile* I understand your pain.
nequam-tenshi chapter 12 . 4/22/2009
not a bad story but i've noticed that you had some grammar mistakes here are there. like not putting a question mark when it's a question.
StaysSweet chapter 12 . 4/30/2007
What a great fic. How exiting! I comepletely foot about chibiusa up untl now. What's going to happen to her? Are her and Hotaru still friends?

Please Update soon!
Auctoritas chapter 12 . 12/11/2006
Are you ever going to update this story or is it dead for good?
serenitynight chapter 12 . 9/9/2005
you did a great job on this story and i cant wait for you to update again. you're an excellent author and i cant wait to read more of your stories.
sweetypie15 chapter 12 . 7/30/2005
AWESOME this story is so kick ass i love it are Hotaru and Trunks going to meet soon, loveing the story update soon.

animechick chapter 12 . 7/12/2005
this story is good so far update it soon

also please e-mail me when you update
watergoddesskasey chapter 12 . 4/21/2005
Bunny Aino chapter 2 . 4/10/2005
Here's a little constructive criticism.

1. You kept the Japanese names! Yay!

2. Why would the senshi betray her?

3. Why would Mamoru betray her?

4. You kept Usagi in character!

5. No offense, but the betrayal plot is VERY overused. Maybe you could turn this into a fic where the senshi are brainwashed by Dr. Gero or something.

6. Good grammar.
Flame Ivy Moon chapter 12 . 3/29/2005
I love it please up date asap!
Serenity-Usagi-Potter06 chapter 12 . 3/29/2005
all i can say do right thing and win
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