hi

Good story. I wish there was more.

Really hope you pick this back up some day. Have followed since chapter 1, and have enjoyed it every time I reread it. Thank you for not deleting!

Random Critique that you can totally ignore:
Okay so, as someone who is very against controlling authoritative figures, the compulsions made me very angry. The matter-of-fact way the characters are talking about it dilutes the emotions that I was expecting to see. I see this every once in a while with authors and I believe it's just the style in which you write your characters. All of the emotions that Harry and the others have come across have been described in the third person, past tense or there isn't an action associated with the emotion (example: harry scoffs while grabbing his hair in anger.). I think without that connector of action, it feels a bit stiff and I'm left feeling frustrated that I'm angrier about what's going on than the characters.

This is a wonderful story. I really hope it continues ️

I know it has been 4 years since the last update, but I hope you complete it. It is one of the most intriguing story that I have ever read!

Very entertaining read

I'm very disappointed that there will be no more of this story written. It's a great story and you write awesomely.

Why does Harry/Imber need to grab Snape to apparate? Can't he travel similar to what Fawkes does with lightning?

Please continue with this!

Well this is an interesting twist.

I love how Harry did this first class. He was wonderful with that last student, I hope that he tells someone who can do something about seeing if her reactions have a reason.

I love how Harry/Imber basically told Riddle to f-off and how he reacted to Malfoy was wonderful

i first found this story when i was in middle school when it was still in construction and followed it religiously, nostalgia compelled me to look for this even if it was still a bit blurry after almost 10 years. but i still found it. is still good as i remember reading it last

cute.

more please