Reviews for Dark Phoenix
CityGirl7768 chapter 29 . 8/25
Good story. I wish there was more.
SilveriTea chapter 29 . 4/30
Really hope you pick this back up some day. Have followed since chapter 1, and have enjoyed it every time I reread it. Thank you for not deleting!
Asterlace chapter 26 . 8/3/2022
Random Critique that you can totally ignore:
Okay so, as someone who is very against controlling authoritative figures, the compulsions made me very angry. The matter-of-fact way the characters are talking about it dilutes the emotions that I was expecting to see. I see this every once in a while with authors and I believe it's just the style in which you write your characters. All of the emotions that Harry and the others have come across have been described in the third person, past tense or there isn't an action associated with the emotion (example: harry scoffs while grabbing his hair in anger.). I think without that connector of action, it feels a bit stiff and I'm left feeling frustrated that I'm angrier about what's going on than the characters.
kittyjel4123 chapter 29 . 7/13/2022
This is a wonderful story. I really hope it continues ️
Guest chapter 29 . 4/7/2022
I know it has been 4 years since the last update, but I hope you complete it. It is one of the most intriguing story that I have ever read!
misherukuro chapter 29 . 3/3/2022
Very entertaining read
Kelvrin chapter 29 . 8/29/2021
I'm very disappointed that there will be no more of this story written. It's a great story and you write awesomely.
cas6039 chapter 3 . 6/16/2021
Why does Harry/Imber need to grab Snape to apparate? Can't he travel similar to what Fawkes does with lightning?
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2021
Please continue with this!
moonprincess97524 chapter 20 . 2/16/2021
Well this is an interesting twist.
moonprincess97524 chapter 11 . 2/16/2021
I love how Harry did this first class. He was wonderful with that last student, I hope that he tells someone who can do something about seeing if her reactions have a reason.
moonprincess97524 chapter 5 . 2/15/2021
I love how Harry/Imber basically told Riddle to f-off and how he reacted to Malfoy was wonderful
SleepyPuppy chapter 29 . 1/17/2021
i first found this story when i was in middle school when it was still in construction and followed it religiously, nostalgia compelled me to look for this even if it was still a bit blurry after almost 10 years. but i still found it. is still good as i remember reading it last
VizeerLord chapter 29 . 12/8/2020

more please
VashonBeader chapter 15 . 10/16/2020
I have been binge reading what has been written so far. Love it! Great narrative, and I am enjoying the plot. I was challenged to read this, and am trying to do so with an open mind. I do hope that you continue it at some point.

Thank you for writing and sharing.
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