I forgot how much I loved this story! I'm really happy your writing again.

I'm so glad you've picked this up again! Really enjoying it - looking forward to seeing how things turn out, in particular what other enchantments were on Harry and the others...

Loved it hope you update soon.

This is a really good story with politics, betrayal... J'aime XD

This is juicylicious!... I just hope the wait for the next update wont be so far and in between. I am glad life has been good to you. Please do keep up the good work.

I think I started reading this story in high school... That was a long time ago.. Still it remains one of my fav stories and has been updated more than the story I started in high school.

Interesting. So the plot to Harry's past thickens. The idea that the Chamber of Secrets was meant to help children in danger - any child, not just of the Slytherin line is how I read it - is an interesting concept; I've read similar ideas before, mostly involving the Sorting Hat and Hogwarts itself, but never the Chamber. The whole communal - or would that be historical? - pensive thing is also interesting. Definitely an original idea. The concept of a very simple compulsion charm - long term or otherwise - having horrible, horrible consequences isn't a new idea, but your specific compulsion and the consequences it wrought is as far as I've read before. I assume next chapter we're going to find out what's going on with Fred and possibly Ginny since their respective Cleansings?

so glad you updated and stopped stifling your creativity. Its kind of the kick in the pants I needed to realize that I am doing the same thing to myself. But that will have to wait a couple more weeks until work stabilizes a bit more.

Tz

Hello,

I'm so happy to see you update this story. The chapter surprised me somewhat since you already have so many plot strings and you added yet another one. (animagus phoenix, relationship with Snape, political interests, nagas, music and now Chamber of Secrets) I think it's a good way to build a bridge between the plot lines and can work as a explanation for some of the nonlogical parts in your story.
I'm looking forward to your next chapter. I somewhat hope to see more of budding Snape/Harry relationship with Harry in his Phoenix shape. So fare I liked that parts best.
1986 (Marlod)
PS English is not my mother tongue so pls oversee any mistakes

Yes! Your back!
Having just reread your story, it is easy to see the change in the writing style. All for the better.

This is where I quit reading.

Changing the name of your main character during the story is one of the stupidest mistakes new writers such as yourself make. As if flipping a switch, the old character ceases to exist, and in its place is a new character. We read Harry Potter fan fiction because we want to read about Harry, not some badly written original character you made up.

I could have put up with your poor writing and plot holes, but changing around established characters is where I draw the line. Please place a warning in your summary if Harry is no longer going to be Harry.

Changing a canon character into an OC is one of the most dishonest things a fan fic writer can do.

Love this

Your first chapter makes absolutely no sense whatsoever. Why would Harry need to leave the Dursleys the way he did? If it was to use the time turner (you called it a 'souvenir' so I can only assume that's what it is) there's no reason why he couldn't do it there. Also, why would Snape stop his chase to dissect a vole? Even with a broken foot he had dozens of options for dealing with Harry (who appears to be a snotty little brat in your story and in need of some discipline). For that matter, why didn't Snape apperate over the fence?

nice