Reviews for Dark Phoenix |
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GwenithFaerieFae chapter 26 . 3/6/2016 Hey, just wondering, is this fic abandoned? It's so good! I'd love to read more! I've been reading for hours unable to sleep but for needing to know what happens next. The characters are excellent, the politics are excellent, and the magic structure is well thought out! Your writing style is lovely and your grammar and spelling are great (with the exception of "defiantly" being used when "definitely" is meant, but that's a super common mistake that's hard to pick up on unless you have a super vigilant beta). I sincerely hope there is more to come, or if this is on hiatus, that you will consider returning to it. 3 Archie |
Waiting ON a wish chapter 26 . 2/28/2016 truly a work of art... while reading it I had all of my feelings with me... I was laughing, growling in anger, crying and feeling deep disgust during Harry's different experiences. I really hope that you soon update, as I absolutely love this story... keep on writing my artist and bring light to this world through your litterature... I really, really, really think your story are amazing |
Guest chapter 26 . 2/25/2016 So awesome this story. I love what you have written and appreciate the time and effort you have given. |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/25/2016 This story is rather wonderful. I've read quite a few where Harry's animal form plays a large role, but this is the best! Imber becomes another character but is still Harry but not. It's an amazingly subtle but distinct difference. Kudo and praise galore! |
InArduisFidelis-RAMC chapter 26 . 2/19/2016 I really hope that this gets updated someday. I love how you don't bash characters or make then come across as just good/evil, rather showcasing the many shades of gray. I cannot wait to see where you go from here :) |
Draeconin chapter 26 . 2/14/2016 I very much like this story, except for one thing. Yes, I've noticed the foreshadowing of the Snape/Harry pairing - a pairing that I despise. Actually I'm a bit of a hypocrite because I've written original stories that had several years between the ages of the (gay) couple. But for some reason I don't like Harry being paired with anyone more than a year or two older than him: male OR female. I also prefer Harry to be either equal or dominant in the relationship/s he *does* participate in. But I suppose that's why there are so many fanfic authors - we all have different tastes. A point of interest, though not really important: The Celts only had seven holidays, only a very few of which (two or three or so) would be celebrated per year in any one area. To get eight, New Age "pagans" stole a Roman holiday - Ostara - to even up their 'wheel'. |
emmalilly21 chapter 26 . 2/13/2016 update please~~! this is amazing |
Me chapter 26 . 2/12/2016 Pleeeease finish this one! It's sooooo good! I mean, the world-building is right up there with The Marriage Stone. And the Snarry! Oh, yes! The Snarry is brilliant! I keep checking back and rereading it! Pleeeease! :-) |
noodledoodledandy chapter 26 . 1/20/2016 Don't abandon, this is awesome. |
Cherrie-san chapter 26 . 1/14/2016 After reading of the tragic news of Alan Rickman's passing, I have been re-reading all my favorite stories with Severus (as a main character) in them. They raise my spirits a bit, but world has lost an incredible (and extremely talented) man. The world seems a little dimmer at his lost. I hope to read more of this, and I wish I was a much better writer- if only to keep Severus (and thus Alan) alive in our hearts and memories. |
nightpurr1 chapter 26 . 1/10/2016 I really have been enjoying your story! I hope you intent to complete it. I hate when I come across a good story that is will written & get involved into it so deeply then it ends up not being finish. Life sometimes delays us but I will be waiting to hear more of your story when your able to bring the next chapter. |
nightpurr1 chapter 15 . 1/10/2016 I am finding your story very enjoyable. |
GuiltyPleasures chapter 26 . 1/7/2016 Please update soon! This one is my favorite Snape, ever! Even better than The Marriage Stone Snape! The vulnerable Snapey goodness! The delicious Snarry developing! Poor Severus needs this strong, powerful, take-no-shit Harry to love and protect him. To possess him completely. To make him feel loved, wanted, desired, needed, safe, belonging. And Harry could definitely use someone like Severus, who knows all about the wizarding world, and all the sneaky ins and outs thereof! Pleasssse continue?! Please?! :-) Happy New Year! |
Foxy-Floof chapter 26 . 1/3/2016 DAMN. Double-damn. Damn the meddling old coot. |
Foxy-Floof chapter 24 . 1/3/2016 *whistles* Damnation, that sounds like a much more believable way to purify yourself than just "The goblins did it"... I suspect that a goblin cleansing right would be painful, or based on sex... depending on the variety, type, and culture you're pulling your goblins from. |