not a bad start, will he be able to control storms?

I love harrys thoughts, especially about the the jam is just made me laugh, very cute as was his jam song. Nacissa does strike me a an intelligent person. cool scene and well writen story

Cool! Quite creative and interesting. But I must say, I feel sorry for Severus, Harry got lost on his wartch! And, Harry is acting like a spoiled brat himself, if he doesn't find some way to relax the Order back at hime, watching him. Unless, I guess, he figures he can simply go back to 'when' he left, safely. I like the idea of a storm phoenix, and I like Narcissa-Harry should listen to her, and take what she figures he's going to do as advice! She could really be a good influence on him. Odd that Draco isn't more sensible, with a mom like her. What she is warning Draco that she is assuming Harry might do, is actually quite a good plan. Is she giving Harry more credit than he is due? Is Harry really just off for a holiday? Or, dare I hope, this will be a learning venture for Harry?

Great Start! Hoping you continue soon.

Fantasic shape change! Love to visualize it! It's nice to have Harry feel free for a while too.

*feels like an idiot, but grins anyway* Ah well...(Congrats, Beech, btw..) I looked a bit too deep into that title thing. Anyway...

I like where this story is going so far, and keep it up...*grins*

nice hope you continue soon

add a new chapter

Hi, Love the picture of Snape dissecting the vole, it's all too easy to picture. ROFL. Looking forward toseeijng what bird Harry becomes, hmm does the title give a clue? Good going.

my gest is that harry is a raven!

pleace let my be right!

wow. Great start, truly...though one question (unless it was your intent not to let us know :D..) what kind of bird is Harry...I would think a falcon or some other bird of prey, but that's just me.

Can't wait for the next chapter (you'll know I'll be returning..).

Kori