|Reviews for Red Alliance|
| Benja chapter 9 . 4/4/2010
Once again.. me back.
So yeah... just to tell you that Tenpou indeed did sit on a chair... Once I guess.
During that time when he told Kenren that he had once let his man get killed.
| Benja chapter 19 . 3/12/2010
And so it ends like that?
wish u would continue writing!
| Benja chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
This is a really wonderful story.
I really love it.
Js finished reading the first half...
I'll comment more later on..
But it seems that u won't be continue writing this right?
Observing from the updated date..
| dragongirl5k5 chapter 19 . 8/27/2009
I noticed this story is not complete, and you haven't updated in quite a while.
I for one adored Saiyuki Gaiden, (it even brought me to tears)and your story gives an interesting perspective of it.
I luv this story and would be very happy if you one day decided to continue it.
| Takada Saiko chapter 5 . 4/6/2009
I love tenpou's eyes. thank you for the flashback.
| Takada Saiko chapter 4 . 4/6/2009
I love the 'ten-chan' scenerio. That was brilliant. Their friendship has a nice ring to it, not the typical, everyday tenpou and kenren fanfiction out there.
| Takada Saiko chapter 3 . 4/6/2009
"flabbergasted"... have my vote for a lovely story thus far, my dear. I've really enjoyed this. I was planning on waiting until the end to review, but I decided that it should be done earlier too. I really am enjoying this.
Your English is not bad, so don't worry. Honestly, the only reason that I even thought about it not being your first langauge is the fact that you use instead of " ". I'm taking French at my university, so I remembered that . Maybe I am learning something after all. That's a good sign!
I look forward to continuing to read your work.
| Naitachal666 chapter 9 . 10/1/2007
A very nice story, so far as I have been able to read. I intend on finishing this tomorrow when I find time. A better review then, I surmise. But still, I find this to be a very good ans suprisingly deep story. And I absolutely love your Kenren so far. He's so loveable.
| Attiqah Gensui chapter 19 . 6/16/2007
You are ALiVE!
Thanks for updating RA! I thought you had given up on it or something. I was so surprised to see it in my email.
What's gonna happen? I wanna know!
| Sanada chapter 19 . 6/9/2007
Actually a Charnel House is a tomb or tomblike building for housing the dead. So your dictionary did a fine job. And a flower would seem out of place there, but I like the battlefield reference better. Nice job.
Someone here was casually reading over my shoulder and read the word wrong and after that we couldn't get past it, so I sent it your way _
| Sanada chapter 18 . 10/22/2006
Sorry it took me so long to read and review this. But in a way I am glad I waited, it gave me a chance to forget how much I loved the way you wove this chapter, so that I could love it anew. I think you did an excellent job showing everyone’s point of view in a very creative fashion. It turned out really well.
| Attiqah Gensui chapter 18 . 10/7/2006
Oh my god... Honmyo-san... Your writing has suddenly has me enthralled and in awe...
| Hellsfirescythe chapter 18 . 9/23/2006
Ah...I'm so glad you have updated. Just as long as you did so that is fine Late has no meaning...unless it's a year late then I'd have to re-read the whole fic again for the chapter to make sense. heh.
The style this time was really interesting. Tenpou, Kanzeon, and Shien. (does a little dance for Shien's because...it's Shien! He needs more love). I like how you connected some things with future events and the conditional tense used here. Interesting interesting.
Goujun...I really wonder what meetings are usually like for the four dragon kings.
| MikaSamu chapter 18 . 9/17/2006
Wow! Just catching up, and the change in style in this chapter only heightens the emotions and the reverberations of historical and personal consequence. Wonderful story, moving chapter.
| Zan chapter 18 . 9/17/2006
The BEST BIRTHDAY Present Ever!... Merci Mon Amie.
Children are using baloons as light saber now...it is Darth Darian vs. Jedi Shahrazad. _
*runs off to read chapter*