Reviews for Dawn's Mall Adventure
slayer99 chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
lol, i love how willow and buffy have been worrying and Dawns just like, ok lets go now :)
Writing4ever4God chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Hi! This story was really cute and really awesome! I really enjoyed it! The Disney store happens to be one of my favorite stores too! I tried to send you an e-mail, but it didn't work. I have a Little Dawn fanfic challenge for you, but I'm not sure if you're up for writing it. I hoped you would consider it though.

I hope to hear from you soon!

God bless,

Lauren
Tara Summers chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
LMAO! I hate it when sales people tell you to go away if you aren't gonna buy anything! This was hilarious, I love it.
buffygirl52789 chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
Haha that was really cute. I love Dawn, so naturally I love your stories. Great job.
gidgetgirl chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
Hehehehehehe... loved this one. Especially Dawn pretending to be rich with the 'Winston' line, the overly serious mall security guard, and Dawn pretending to be a forty three year old midget. Hilarious.
Reviewer chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
Haha, funny. this was my favorite part: “Is she in any apparent danger?
MBB chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
:-)
Mel chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
great story. luv the way u write. question. dawn is 14 and i dont think that she would wanna go inta KB toys and all those other stores. just a tip. great story!
freezyboncoolipants chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
“Mom, tell Winston to bring the car around. We’re trying someplace else.