Reviews for Ayanami
mangafreak7793 chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
this went very well keep it up
Sesshy's Girl 00 chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
Well done. You captured Rei's voice excellently. It was slightly supressing but that's to be expected concidering the subject of you writting. The only flaw that I saw was that Rei was naked when she went with Gendo to Lilith.
Lian Li chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
Thats a good fic and its a bit depressing ] Though i dont really understand it a whole lot because i didnt see the movies or anything but this helped.
sentinel28 chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
Good start-keep going; I want to read more.

One question, though: wasn't Rei naked?
mystlady chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
that was a great fic and well written.
Rocket chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
Hey, this is pretty good. The ending could use a bit more polish, but you did a great job of capturing Rei, and I guess that's what matters. Sounds exactly like her. Nice work!