Otra joya, lastima que no la hayas continuado y terminado.
Te aseguro que lo poco que escribiste es excelente
Gracias por compartir aunque sea un poco de tu genio.
Deseo estés muy bien con salud y bienestar
Realmente espero leernos... Abrazos en la distancia

*Clutches my hat in my hand*
*looks up at you with big eyes*
"Please, sir, I'd like some more."

Okay, if that won't work I'm not above groveling at your feet lol. Great story so far, I know it'a not been updated in ages, but I'd love an update when possible!

Love it so far- especially the quick little mention of Mrs. Norris! I've always thought she was a real person- I'm hoping your story touches on what happened to her to become stuck (or not?) as a cat. I know it's unfinished, so I'm also here to shamelessly beg for an update, or even a quick summary of how the rest goes!

Another tantalising, beautifully written fragment. Thanks for this. I'm saddened that it's incomplete, but better an unfinished gem than a completed mess. Having read your bio, I now understand better why it's unfinished. Thanks for writing as much as you did.

You have to finish this, dear Author! Your characters demand it! They are suspended in limbo!

ooh. this is very good

This is a very good story, I took a great pleasure in reading it. If one day you decided to continue writing it, I'll be here.

excellent, more please

A very interesting and well-written start to a story. I wish you had continued, but it was worth reading what you had so far. Thanks for sharing it.

Out Of Time is fav

Ooo I hope u update!

Ahhh this story is amazing! I know it's very unlikely since it's over 10 years old, but I'd love to see the rest of it one day!

I really love this one, too, just so you know. You are a wonderful writer svc I hope you have not abandoned the craft as you have these stories.

I really like this Hermione and Snape!

You must continue this story. Very good beginning!