Reviews for The Falsebound Kingdom: Hero's Crusade
draconichero21 chapter 20 . 12/31/2012
Oh my biscuits this was the most amazing thing I've read in a while and I don't say that often. I found this fanfic through the tvtropes recommendation and I must say I'm disappointed that you haven't updated in four years. This is like the only GameCube game I still play that I own and you're doing it justice.
Oh man, i would love to see this thing finished and I would love to talk to you and help you if you're struggling.
For crying out loud, one of my own fanfic's plot was derived from Falsebound Kingdom as inspiration. You need, no, you must finish this. Through hell or high water finish this because I will read it and I will like it!

At the very least could you please respond to my review?
guard1ans chapter 11 . 11/27/2012
Not bad, but I really don't think the characters would act like this.
CuteDrakon chapter 20 . 6/6/2012
All I can say is WOW! I don't know why I didn't find this earlier...

because I just found your writing only two days ago. In all of this I can

truly said that you nailed Yugi's and Joey's characters. I can only wonder

what Kaiba is like (a question for the FAR off future.) and how his story would be...

( once again if someone else or I get around to it... a major possibility...)

I can't wait to see what happens next and keep up the great work!

Eagerly waiting,

CuteDrakon
phantom-phan-28 chapter 20 . 9/22/2011
Awesome! But when do we get to see Kaiba?
AnotherAuthor chapter 20 . 1/17/2011
I really liked this fanfic, {despite the gore being higher than my comfort zone} SO I'm severly disappointed that even after waiting two years, there's nothing more. I know its hard at times, with writers block and all, but please don't post someting you're not going to finish.

All i'm politley requesting is that you either

A. Finish it!

B. Not mind if I reuse your plot in my own writings, to give all your fans the satisfaction of knowing how it ends.
darkYami1214 chapter 20 . 12/13/2010
Well I can't say much, but I have to tell you this chapter was great. I still fell bad for Yugi he's still trapped in his curse. you Know what you should do for the next chapter, when Yugi is Facing of Joey, is that Joey could call him hurtful things that will cause Yugi to feel worst(AN: I'M A YAMI YUGI FAN, I DON'T HATE HIM)like filthy/stupid half-blood, or pathetic leader,or ''Your a discrase to this game!'' (sorry if I can't spell). Or something like that, you decided.

P.S KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Isis the Sphinx chapter 20 . 4/20/2010
*poketh* Any chance of this ever being updated again? Just want to know if this has been abandoned.

Wonderful story, with a very twisty plot. Looking forward to more. Keep writing!
Yamifangirl chapter 20 . 1/27/2010
This is an awesome fanfic! But , uh, where's the rest? Sis and I have waited over a year and a half for the next chapter, so.. Are we just going to the wrong spot? Where's the rest! *Is obsessed*
Legacyofthedawn chapter 20 . 9/25/2009
I can say that beyond a doubt this is the best Yugi-oh story on this site! The story is deep and layered, with changes in the plot that truly give this a more complete feeling than the game did. I hope you update soon.

My only question is, is yugi or yami in control? You say its yami, but the character has a more 'yugi' feel to it...
Anthurak The Chaos Lord chapter 20 . 9/6/2009
Wow. Where do I begin?

First of all, great story. Probably the best Yugioh fic I've ever read. This seriously makes me wish they did an anime arc on this game. But you've also gone the extra step to add a deeper plot and events (like with Slifer). And the whole deal with Slifer-ized Yami is both original and cool. extra points for that.

Very few real flaws to speak of. I did find it a little wierd that Yami is so averse to killing, but you did say that it's a major plot point so I guess that's a moot point. Your characteriztion is overall very nicely done, though sometimes Yami seems to be acting more like Yugi then what we see in canon. Speaking of Yugi, what happened to him? You did say that Yami's been in control ever since they were sucked in, but shouldn't he have been able to talk to Yugi through their mind link? I mean, is Yugi just trapped between the real world and the vitual one or something? It's a little confusing and I think you should address it (even if it's in an AN).

The other problem I've had is how the battle system seemed to magically shift from turn-based to real time after the second mission. It's not a bad change, but I think you either address it, or rewrite those first few battles to drop it completely. It's just kind of wierd seeing it shift for no apparent reason.

Other then those minor problems, very nice story. Though I do have two questions concerning where your going with it. Are you going to bring in fusion combos? Because if Tristen already has Gazille, it wouldn't be too hard to give him Berfomet so he can use Chimera would it? Plus that would be pretty cool. Also, you are giving Yami the super Dark Magician Trio right? I hope so.

Update soon!
dArkliTe-sPirit chapter 20 . 7/12/2009
Man, I took FOREVER to review this ;

...man, Tristan's pretty smart. He picked that up really fast. (As for that note, it reminds of the episode where Yugi and Joey dueled, first season) Too bad Yugi's still pretty much possessed by Slypher (Oh, and the line about Kaiba? I nearly died laughing) Poor guy doesn't even understand...and then only he can save Tea...I'm worried. Reading on...

And then he gets caught. I HATE the Imperials! HATE THEM! I nearly cheered when Yugi started killing them, except that it upset him so badly.

And - hey, he can fly! :D That was kinda gruesome, but, yeah, go him...and then Tristan has to take them back...(starts snickering)
Keys2theKingdom chapter 14 . 7/1/2009
So...EPIC! :O I LOVE THIS STORY! I ABSOULUTELY 100% ADORE IT!

3

My brain is going to explode with epic-ness!
Keys2theKingdom chapter 3 . 6/30/2009
Okay,so, is this peachshipping or revoulutionshipping? I hope it's peachshipping...
Yamifangirl chapter 8 . 6/22/2009
I suppose there's a first time for everything, but.. Ryo and Bakura working together? Thats a new one.. "Cause there's no way Ryo would or could do that, knowing him.. Weird.. i suppose it falls under the "the enemy of my enemy is my friend." But still. O_o Oh well. I am entranced! Hehe!
Yamifangirl chapter 7 . 6/22/2009
Omigosh! You can write Yami perfectly! He sent a chill down my spine, just as he did in the very first Yami no games. you are so awesome! Spirit said there are thirty chapters to this, and you mentioned that our review encouraged you to write the next chapter, I know your life must be busy, so the fact that you can write, like, this good, simply, like, shocks me! So GO SHINING CHARIZARD! You ROCK!
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