Reviews for Handprints on the Window
onezero chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
I just came across the MKR section and saw your story. It was heartbreaking and made me cry. Hikaru is my favourite character and MKR was my first anime. Thanks for this.
Asmi LOVER chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
oh my gosh... i just noticed that i was crying...

this was so beautiful... you're a great writer... i think i'll go mourn now...

~Asmi LOVER~
PiKACHUFAN4288 chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
i'm sad, but at least i feel complete about this fanfic now. and there's retribution, so i should feel happy right?

but i'm still mixed up because of hikaru's unfortunate end, but then if hikaru hadn't uhm.. yeah, then it would've been umi. gr, mixed emotions are annoying but that was most likely your intention, right?

excellent job again. i really liked your use of metaphors and symbolism. made the descriptions infinitely more effective.
swordanddagger chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
I had read Footsteps in the Snow and it was creepy, but this one was just sad. Still a good story though.
Duzzie chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
I loved it. I had been wandering what exactly had happened, and so I really liked this somewhat happy ending. You are a great writer.
Bynpocalypse chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Just as good as Footprints in the Snow, and just as sadness-inducing. Poor, poor little Hikaru. At least she got to save Umi and all was put to rest. I enjoy your writing very much and look forward to future stories.
Millenium Eki chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
Read the lyrics. It's sad song I remembered while reading this fic. I'l trye to translate it.

Tarvin aikaa.

I need more time.

Muistan sen illan kun tavatiin klubilla/

mentiin meille himaan ja aletiin chillaan/

I remember the night when we met at the club/

we went on my place to hang out/

Sit nähtiin monta kertaa aina sen jälkeen/

diggasin sust ja aloit olla mulle tärkee/

Then we met many times after it/

I liked you and you started to mean to me/

Sanoit et tuut muistaa mut ikuisesti/

tähän päivään saakka toivoin et se lupaus kesti/

You said that you would remember me forever/

until now I’ve hope’d that promise would last/

Muistelen yhteisiä hetkiä pilke silmäs/

mun ainoa toive et olisit nyt täs/

I recall our moments together smiling/

my only wish is you to be here with me/

Sit jossain vaihees sun hommat alko lipsuu/

kuulin et rupesit blaadaa ja vetää nipsui/

Then you started sliping/

you took pills and started drinking/

Yritin autaa, mut et antanu autaa/

nyt opit kaiken, kantapään kautaa/

I tried to help, but you did’t let me/

now you learn it, by hard way/

En nää sua missään, en sua millään löydä/

istun yksin clubil, ja venaan samas pöydäs/

I don’t find you, I don’t see you anywhere,

I sit alone, still waiting for you here/

Jossa eka kertaa sut muistan nähneen/

jos kuulet mua, sä oot mulle viel tärkee/

Where I first time saw you/

if you hear me, you still mean to me/

Kyl mäkin sua kaipaan/

mut menneisyys liikaa painaa/

I miss you too/

but past hurts too much/

Ehkä kohta on meidän taivaan/

mut mä tarvin aikaa/

Perhaps it’s our time soon/

but I need more time/

Näin sun frendejä viime viikolla, oot kuulemma skarpannu/

soitin sulle mut ei muu kuin vastaaja vastannu/

I saw your friends last week, they said you have got out/

I tried to call you, but I only reach answering machine/

Toivoin et ne ois ees kerran ollu oikeessa/

sit näin sut stadissa olit doussessa selkeest/

I hoped they were right/

but I saw you high/

Pelkään sun puolesta oon huolissani susta/

pelkään et kukaan ei pidä sun selustaa/

I’m afreid and woried about you/

I’m afreid that nobody is backing you up/

Viimeks kun nähtiin et enää tunnistanu/

huusin sun perään, mut ei sekään auttanu/

Last time we met you didn’t recognice me enymore/

I yelled after you, but didn’t help me at all/

Mä tiesin et sulla oli joskus vaikeet/

sunhan piti hoitaa ittes irti kaikest/

I know you had hard times once or twice/

you had to get rid of everythig/

Mä sua kaipaan ja tiedän en oo ainoo/

sun muistos mua päivästä toiseen vainoo/

I miss you, and I know I’m not only one/

your memory haunts me from day to another one/

Toivoin et oisin sua vaa enemmän auttanu/

mut se soitti mulle eilen
Shika.Tot chapter 1 . 7/20/2004
That was really good, ur such an awsome writer. You rock! Great story
me chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
I wish I could think of something profound to say about how beautiful and sad this story was, but I'm too busy sobbing. So... congrats on another beautifully written story, Candyland. _~v
AlyKat Ishi chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
that was really cute it almost made me cry
hikaru29 chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
cool. the bastard finally got what he deserved. i hope he'd be insane for as long as he lives.

really nice chills running up and down my spine the whole time i was reading this. and you know what? i was really scared beyond my wits with that 'hikaru-on-the-window scene. really. _ it just got the hell out of me, and i was kinda like shaking here in my seat. and i was surrounded by lots and lots of gory darkness here in my room...*eery sounds*

anyway, have a nice day! _
TheYellowKirby chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
One word... no, wait, two... ABOSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! Thank you for adding on to your previous story. You are such a great writer.
VixieAngel chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
Oh wow that was awsome. You are right the first one is always better, but you have broken the mold and made a second one be just as equal. Glad I could help:)
Virginia Choir chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
A vry moving fic. Touches my heart and even made me cry... too nicely written! Good work! Keep it up, haha.
Orenji Yume chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
hihi! this was really beautiful! _ i'm glad u wrote a sequel. ) and, um, yeah, sensitive me nearly cried. ;; u really portrayed their friendship really well, and so it was really touchin. great job! keep it up!
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