|Reviews for Written in the Stars|
| Katca Mcadar chapter 14 . 9/4/2005
Ah that was lovely & I'm glad u did a happy ending or I wud hav had 2 kill u! Btw was Grace in heaven 2, I mean she did nuthing wrong...apart from biting. I liked how it was that he cud love her in heaven, but not on Earth, (coz we all kne he cudn't.) Ur end notes were gr8: 'any1 can make a gr8 couple in heaven' but no possessiveness or sexual desires in heaven? NO! Lollo & as for that review by 'somebody out there', everything me & u discussed on the telephone, CHESS WILL NEVER GO GAY! She's a straight as spagetthi, (before it's been cooked!) A brilliant ending to a very moving & thought provoking story! U get huggles from me! X
| Katca Mcadar chapter 13 . 9/4/2005
What a nice tactful priest...("Must...get...away...from...grieving...family...*run*)So how old was Annora? (Rememba I suck at Maths,) & her birthday sounded awfully familiar *cough*MS*cough* Am only joking m'dear! That was so sad, especially as u sed the last parargraph. I hope God lets them into heaven anyway, I mean what could the Devil do to her? Her sins are only slight, so whats he gonna do? Mess up her hair? I kno u wudn't like it! Well Done X
| Doctor Harley Quinn chapter 14 . 8/12/2005
Bravo! Yay! And all that goodness and all... you did a really, /really/ good job.
As someone who prefers happy endings, I'm surprising myself by saying that chapter thirteen reflected what I figured /should/ have happened. Dracula deserved it all. (Grumbles) Bloody menace... (Hides behind a giant tree just in case he happens to be nearby) Still, the epilogue/alternate ending ended it on a happy note, which never fails to put me in a good mood, no matter how much the protagonist/antagonist/whatever-he-was might deserve their fate.
Probably the best Van Helsing story I've ever read. You're a genius writer- I'm looking extremely forward to reading your stories in the future!
| somebody out there chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
hmm...I'd have to say this story is one of the most unique I've ever read. it seems after reading most of your notes on it (I read everything on you), that you are a Christian, but after hearing about your experimentation with slash I feel I must warn you. I used to experiment with all that stuff too a couple years ago, but then after a long, hard, soulful battle God somehow managed to yank me away from it (He is omnipotent, after all). for someone who knows that "sin can be forgiven but never justified" you should know better. I can only tell you what I have experienced and try to warn you: you get to decide whether to believe me. what I want to say is this: stay away from homosexuality. it brings false happines and many tears. I can within an inch of hell and still sometimes feel I'm still there. I don't hate gays: they should be pittied for being stuck in such a rut as I once was. if you get involved, many years from now you'll regret it for the rest of your life, as I now do. not a day goes by that I don't curse myself for what I've allowed the devil to inspire in me, all my horrific sins. it hurts whenever I see people like you with such a bright future willing to go down like I did, so I felt I simply have to write this. just remember that whatever you do shall be your own doings and not to blame anyone for helping you along: God will forgive you when you repent. I know I sound like an old grandma, but that what it did to me: I'm only 16 and yet feel as if I've sinned more than my allotment for my finite lifetime. as for the debate whether homosexuality is really a sin, look up the passage directly after the creation of woman: (paraphrazed) "For that is why when a man leaves his parents and clings to his wife, and they become one flesh"-God took Adam's "rib" (the actual Hebrew says something more along the lines of "cleaving" Adam in half) and made it into Eve. Thus a woman literally becomes the other half of a man. two men can't fit; two women can't fit; its like puzzle pieces with the wrong joints. you may have a different opinion but please remember that I am very much like you: I too realize things are in black and white, like you do, but it took my risking my soul to find this truth out. you have so much potential as a writer and I'd beg you not to throw it away (as I did for several years), but I'm not sure that work and I feel as if that'd waste my time. just remember your own words if you continue on this path, because you've gotten most of them right.
| Estrella of the Moon chapter 14 . 8/11/2005
Wow! It was sad at first but the epilogue was so good! At first I expected Dracula to see the consequences of his actions and fall into nothingness, existing in neither heaven or hell since most authors do that. But I like ur version way better! Your so talented and hopefully you'll write more great stories in the future!
| vanity is my name chapter 14 . 8/11/2005
Oh, that was really good! And sad, and a ton of other stuff! I get what you mean about Dracula and Annora being together in heaven, and about Grace, so no worries. :) I suppose it is an appropriate ending, if no very romantic. That's okay though; great job! I really liked this! Byes for now!
| Fortune Zyne chapter 14 . 8/10/2005
Well butter my butt and call me a bisquit, how cool!
| vanity is my name chapter 12 . 7/30/2005
The biscuits have chocolate on them? Lol...OMG, how sad, and tragic, and horrible, and a ton of other negative words. Everything is such a mess! This chapter made me cry. Poor Annora! Ugh, how can any of this end well? How will you fix it all with only one chapter left? This can't be the end! NO! *sniff* Well, I still can't wait for your next chapter...even if this one is just so SAD! :'( That poor little baby...Anyway, update soon, ok?
| vanity is my name chapter 11 . 7/30/2005
Dracula-shaped biscuits? I want one! *peering hopefully* Are there any left for me? Can I have one? PLEASE? Lol, anyway, I love this story...what will the baby be, human or vampire? Oh, I'm so curious! I guess I'll just ahve to read the next chappie then, huh? Okay, onward, to chapter 12! :)
| vanity is my name chapter 2 . 7/30/2005
Oh, I like this so far! I LOVED the descriptions in the first chapter...in fact, your use of imagery in your writing is wonderful. I just felt like telling you that before I continue reading. :)
| Almost-Lost-Hope6 chapter 12 . 7/29/2005
ah! NO! ::tear::
| Katca Mcadar chapter 12 . 7/27/2005
Ah the bit with the thumb freaked me out, you little beast. I liked the whole description of the dream & shattering. Also the bit where Aleera changes her mind about what she is thinking. Poor Grace...& you say you love babies! HA! Ahem. Sorry. X
| Fortune Zyne chapter 12 . 7/25/2005
| Doctor Harley Quinn chapter 12 . 7/25/2005
Holy... crap. I /swear/, one of these days I'm either going to kill Dracula or lock him up somewhere. At least, that's what I wanted to do after reading this... (Flatpalms him in the head) You idiot!
(Quickly ducks behind Phoebe so that she won't get attacked)
Okay, yes, I'm dying to know what happens. You HAVE to tell me! I've always liked Aleera- hope she comes through, even through her jealousy. Kay, update soon, please! (Big smile, offers brownies)
| et-spiritus-sancti chapter 12 . 7/25/2005
Good God, that was CREEPY. I knew something had to be really wrong when the baby came out perfectly fine. Then, oy, blood instead of milk, that was just crepy. Props for making me shiver.
Don't know what's gonna happen next, and that's just the way I like it! Update soon!