|Reviews for Transformation|
| just another mythical creature chapter 1 . 1/10
GOD everytime i accidentally read this again and am just like holy fuck why, but at the same time im crying ... sadly to say though, this was really well written but my heart cant take this ... your killing me beautifully and i dont know what to do :'(
| SpadeyJadey01 chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
OMG LUFFY ! I have to say this is good even though you MURDERED LUFFY
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
Is it bad that I started laughing?
I realized Luffy had gotten hurt or something via deacription, then you mentioned character death and I was like "oh, so Luffy dies and Zoro gets pissed? Ok." *reads first paragraph*
And then I started laughing xD I don't know why but the idea of Zoro going insane and killing the everyone (except the crew ') makes me laugh.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
I love it, it's so kawii. :3 I love how Zoro kills all those people.
| Amyand chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Nice story..and i won't yell "OMG you killed luffy" hahahaha
I just like the story and the way you describe the demonic zoro..and i thought that what would happened if luffy was dead in Loguetown.
| LostFairyMantic chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
You know, your short stories are really growing on me, never thought that I would like short stories untili now! : D Did I mention that I love maniac angsty stories? XD
| SushiLoverForLife chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Wow, so much happened in such a small amount of space!
I love it though :)
| deadhemoglobin chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
One just cannot deny the fact that out of all the straw hats, it's Zoro that's been more attached to Luffy and vice versa. Lol, yeah, s'why I love them since the beginning of their journey. Ahahaha. (tho I also believe that all of the straw hats are equal or whatever, but still, the two have already done several things that PROVE THEIR LOVE WITH EACH OTHER) ahaha yeah so, this story is believable for I always see in manga that it's Zoro who gets worked up everytime Luffy does reckless things, but only when Zoro knows the opponent is the real deal. And I also believe that Luffy'll do the same. And I remember in Sabaody, when Zoro first vanished, Luffy was, like, stunned and he just uttered Zoro's name for like 5 times before his senses came to him oh my god ok, ZoLu moment, and that's the time that I really cried so hard, even harder than I cried in Merry's funeral. Hahaha, whatever man. Thanks.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
that was really good short story
| Demonslave chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
I liked it. It made a good story. Hehe even though Luffy was killed *tear drop* it still is very good! :D
| drana0 chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
So powerful! Only 400 words and this story has so much emotions in it.. Zoro's emotions were so believable and I could picture the last scene in my head. Thank you for this beautiful story.
| Anjelle chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
So sad ;_; Poor Zoro...Really powerful, especially considering how short it is. Really well done! I commend you! :D
...I know how it feels to get reviews consisting of complaints of Luffy's dead _; You are brave to be able to bare with it...
| xoxInnerHollowxox chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
So...SO well written. And completely and utterly heartbreaking.
I could see something like this happening if Luffy died, I could see Zoro losing it like that.
Great story, amazing work. Keep it up.
| puruku chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Poor Zoro, I can only imagine the anguish he must have felt at that moment...
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
I love you. :)
You really are an awesome writer. :)