|Reviews for Unity Day at Duke’s|
| Eggmal chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
Okay, well, I've been reading through your stuff and you've got yourself a fan. I'm adding you to my favorite authors. However, I am put off by your typos. They're generally understandable, misspellings that are similar to the correct word but the sheer quantity is...annoying. It completely takes me out of the story and that's a shame because you have great ideas and the writing ability to back them up. I beg of you, use the spell checker! It was made to catch these kinds of mistakes. Admittedly it wouldn't have caught your use of "Mel" instead of "Mal"; it bothers me that you went through all the trouble of using the correct Chinese but didn't get the captain's name right! . Like I said before though, your writing? It's good but make the spell check your friend. Please?
| jebbypal chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
Nice ficlet except for the typos throughout...and it's Mal not Mel.