Awee ;-; the feels

Woah, this is definitely not okay. The writing was good, but I - .. ouch.

WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
MY EMOTIONS

Really. I am actually nearly in tears. This was beautiful and heart-wrenching and overall amazing. Your descriptions are so good and I can see all of it really clearly. Especially in the end scene. Also, everyone was totally in character.
It takes a lot of beauty and sadness from a fanfic to make me nearly cry. Part of me wants to punch you in the face and part of me wants to love you forever. I think the latter.
*curls up in a ball and sobs*

Oh my god, this is so beautiful, you captured the soul and greatness of the characters perfectly and the ending.. oh it made me cry. great job, faved.

aww wow. so raw - so powerful. great job.

Oh. Well . . . that was beautiful. :(

-Faba

*Sniffle* that was so...sad.

I loved the book, it was really good. Though Orwell's (I think it's him, anyway) reading made it rather boring, it was still an emotionally moving book, and very satisfying. And your story is really good, too. I like Simon. Too bad he had to die...*cry*

aww that was really sad. Im suffering terrible memory loss, seeing as I just read this part of the book in 2nd period today, but did Ralph help kill Simon? I really can't remember, thats embarrassing. anyways great story!

oh beautiful...

this was amazing, really, it was.

Oh my god, this made me cry! It's amazing... you should write more stories like this!

Beautiful! SImply beautiful! I love it! Simon is my favorite character, and he rarely gets the recognition he deserves, so good job!

Oh. Em. Gee. That was flipping AWESOME! Cept for the fact that my fav character dies again but i mean, if its for making a plot for my OMG FAVORITE LoTF couple, i guess its alright with me. But this fic is DEFINITELY going in my favs _~

Ralph/Simon forever!

-Maiden of Mystery

Nice.

*cries as a baby* Wh...Why? I mean... Your fanfic is lovely, I loved it. Simon and Ralph were really cute thogether, but... *cries more* Wah, I had to know, my favorite character always dies in the end! And you had to remember me about this, your evil, evil author *adds story to favorites*. I really liked it... Specially the end of the fic.

aww, that was really good.

i'm crying now! it brings back one of the saddest scenes in the whole story. *sniffle* you're a very good writer and i liked the imagery of the beach you added. pleasure reading~

xo. m. b