|Reviews for Bad Oysters|
| Katie-Poo 107 chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
Hey this is good! Why have u stopped? Please keep goin! lol!
| T'PeeJ chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
Well that was interesting.
| me chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
Problem with your story is that there was no way Tony could hear what Kate was saying on the phone to Gibbs - it wasn't on speakerphone and he was across the room. What you heard Kate saying about oysters was only for the viewers to hear. As soon as Gibbs told Tony that Kate had said oysters Tony knew she was giving a clue. Gibbs was the one who screwed up by not repeating it the oysters comment to Tony until several hours later.
| Susan217 chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
I would advise you to focus more on Tony's emotions vs his actions. You kind of just wrote down what happened in the scene.
Very cute idea though. I did like Tony's concern over Kate. Nice touch of humor in his thoughts on oysters for breakfast. :)
| weing1 chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
Good but too short
I'd like to see a story written about Tony's POV once he finds out who that Marta was.
| jtbwriter chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
Good-as I've pointed out in other reviews-
Tony slipped up on this-Kate gave a clue big
as day that she was in trouble! "She had tuna
Thank God Gibbs caught it!
Good beginning tho-where do we go from here?