Reviews for Lament to a Fallen Star
night strider chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Believe me, I love it...I'd like to think he died tragically as this...one of my fave Noldorin princes, this guy...I especially liked the 5 last lines, they sort of induce pity and sadness...would you minde writing one for Maglor? I like that guy a good deal too...
Skycat14 chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
I loved this poem, it was so powerful! Just out of curiosity are you ever goning to finish "A Tale Struck Out of History and Ereinion and the Angel?" Please keep writing Gil-galad stories, there are far to few of them out there.
Evenstar Elanor chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
sad... and it almost carries a scornful tone. i don't know why i feel that. did u intend that? but i like the language and how u incorporated many things.