Reviews for Tarethniel & Mithral Hall
Waldfee chapter 2 . 6/20/2004
Very good storyline, but there are too many spelling errors in your story. Are more chapters coming (soon)?
fionfee chapter 2 . 6/12/2004
I think it is ok, but before you start putting up a story, pritty pritty please write more than 2 chapters? which is why I have none up yet.

but so far it is good
SilverWolf7 chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
Hi! Saw your review and decided to look at your story little piece of advice, can you make ti so that it is in paragraphs? I cannot read a big block of writing without getting a headache...

If you don't know how, well, email me then at