this was beautiful in it's own way; I could definitely see this being the sort of thing he thought

It was short but it was powerful! Not everybody writes the blood and gore on PGSM or SM. I wish they did though. I mean it was a WAR and all wasn't it? I'm glad you captured the sense of war and played it out real life like.

Powerfully written

Good job!

Very nice characterization of Kunzite! (You DO have to feel bad for the poor guy...)

::sob:: Oh, that scene always makes me teary-eyed...And I think you portrayed Kunzite quite well. The anger, frustration, sadness...It's all there, and fantabulously done. :)

VERY well written.

This is a very nice and, IMO, very realistic portrayal of Kunzite. Thumbs up! XD