|Reviews for No Words Here|
| Goomba chapter 2 . 2/19/2009
Well, i sort of like it. It's too charater centered; which is hard to get around because what everelse you write about it's going to be about Sam/Laura; but, when the whole world is in termoil I don't think (in any sort of reality at least) that so much can be done because one child was lost. Basically there is no realism here (or at least, not enough to hold me through) Too many topics, covered too broadly. You have a good idea, it just needs some more preparation before execution is all. Good luck in future,
| DaughterofAthena87 chapter 10 . 1/28/2008
I loved this! OMG, awesome job! This is one of my favorites! D
-love love love-
| theLouvre chapter 10 . 3/30/2006
OH MY GOD! THAT WAS SUCH A FANTASTIC STORY! THEY ACTUALLY GET TOGETHER! OH MY GOD! FANTASTIC STORY! Keep on writing more stories! They're FANTASTIC!
| suspensegirl chapter 10 . 3/18/2005
OMG! This story was amazing...always, always write more! I love the wedding thing! It was awesome!
| suspensegirl chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
This story is great...preferrably I like Sam/Laura moments, but a different side is always good, and it might help to show that Sam cares even more, if possible, than before.
| Amanda chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
What an amazing opening chapter! I can't wait to read more! You've already managed to captivate me within one chapter! lol.
| The Person chapter 10 . 1/31/2005
I CAN'T STOP READING THIS!
I CAN'T STOP CRYING!
| The Person chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
You are so ill minded.
YOU PUT LAURA IN A WHEELCHAIR FOR CHRISTS SAKE!
| Catalyst chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
What a weird story. Interesting but weird...
| Sabi2 chapter 10 . 10/26/2004
This is one of the first DAT fics that I have read,and I really enjoyed it. I liked it because it added onto what already happened, instead of changing it. I only recently saw the movie and loved it, but everyone I talked to hated it. Its nice to see that other people liked it enough to write about it. Keep up the good work!
| Callioope chapter 2 . 10/23/2004
"The teenager felt a broad spectrum of human emotion right then" I like this line.
"we were stuck in there, and it seemed no one would rescue us" - why didn't they get out of the car and start walking? why wouldn't anyone stop?
''"It's beautiful, though. Sad, but beautiful…" "Kind of like you." He pointed out, smiling slyly.'' Aww!
Can't wait for more Sam/Laura moments!
| Callioope chapter 1 . 10/23/2004
I like your phrasing and style. Very nice so far.
Just one question - the people who died... how did they get their bodies? How did Tessa die? I know, I haven't read the next chapters yet... hopefully these will be answered later.
So far though... nice work!
| Carmela chapter 8 . 10/19/2004
In this sentence what does this mean, "and in the further. I read the paragraph several times and have no idea what it means. This is why proofreading is SO important to a story. I have seen so many grammatical errors and typos in stories that it's not funny. They make the story uninteresting. Please proofread and have someone else proofread.
| Lucie Brody chapter 10 . 10/13/2004
What? Its over... no that can be! I love it, great story!
| Lucie Brody chapter 9 . 10/13/2004
Yea! Happy ending... but sad too cause it will be over.