Reviews for Spirits with us
CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 15 . 11/10/2010
It definitely isn't soon but will it ever be updated?
rincewind1990 chapter 15 . 8/13/2008
any idea when ur ging to update next? been like 2 years since ur last one and this fic is to good to be abandond
HarimaHige chapter 15 . 4/30/2008
Wheres the next chapter? You cant stop here. I wait here a long time. Please update sonn.
kidcrud chapter 15 . 10/22/2007
its good
BloodyFrost chapter 15 . 6/12/2006
Finally I can get a review in. For some odd reason this wasn't working.

Anyway, it seems like you still have some of your writing skills. Awesome man!

You're still doing pretty good in my book.

I noticed something, some people would write fic BECAUSE their bored. For you, it's the other way around.

But still, if you promise us to still give us an ending that would be great.

I will wait for you again to update.
Ruto Kuntai chapter 14 . 6/7/2006
Well, that was interesting, in fact best chapter.
BloodyFrost chapter 14 . 6/7/2006
Bored of writing, eh?

I can tell by how you never update. Even though you got people who like this fic. Like for example, but you know that already.

Well lets see if you really can keep your promise.
Gundam Chief chapter 13 . 3/29/2006

Here's my review.

There isn't much to correct or much that I would recommend to make it better. Granted it could much better with by being longer and more details to the setting, such as environment and characters. though this can't be said about most adults, not everybody knows what to expect or what places like "the Redlight District" look like. but those are just examples, my suggestion is to add a little more detail into the story environment.

as for your reaction to my last Review..._; well I live in the United States where almost any type of weapon can be bought, but to be specific Alaska is where I live. In Alaska as long as you get the correct paperwork and license you can own almost any type of weapon legally, including automatic and assault weapons. I'm not sure about heavy weapon like Recoiless rifles and missile launchers but I wouldn't doubt it.

update when you can.
Dark Knight Gafgar chapter 2 . 3/21/2006
I was reading through the first chapters again when I saw the author's note. I recently started reading Negima! as well, I've currently got the first eight manga and the series and am duly impressed.

As for your question, you say you've got the first five volumes? Pick up volume 4 and flip to the part where Konoka tells Negi and Asuna how she and Setsuna met. During the flashback, in one scene Konoka is looking at an archway through which four people "From the Shinmei school" are entering.

The child is eventually revealed to be Setsuna, however the other three are not OFFICIALLY named... but as you can see, the two women in the flashback are obviously Motoko and Tsuruko, or at least mirror images of them. The unidentified man is commonly thought to be Tsuruko's husband.

For this and other reasons, Love Hina and Negima! are commonly considered to be part of the same universe. Other Ken Akamatsu works such as "A.I. Love You" and "Itsudatte My Santa" are also considered to be set in the same universe as well, though I'm not sure what physical evidence those series have connecting them to Akamatsu's two more well-known works (I've read somewhere that Chachamaru Karakuri in Negima! and the android chick in the Love Hina anime who's name I've forgotten resembled characters from A.I. Love You, but I don't know how accurate this claim is).

Hope all that helps.
Dark Knight Gafgar chapter 13 . 3/21/2006
I'd thought this story had bought the farm, good to stumble upon it again and see it's been updated. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

And yeah, I picked up on the similarities to Yu-Yu Hakusho pretty quickly. Still, I believe you when you say you hadn't seen the show before - weirder stuff has happened after all. Ah well.
Ainigmatikos chapter 13 . 1/30/2006
Hurrah for updates!
pyrotechnic chapter 13 . 1/30/2006
Begging For a Update chapter 13 . 1/28/2006
bout time buddy, and lets see some KeitaroXYumiko man, it seems like it, and i WANT it to be that, i mean, it'd be hilarious, Keitaro goin Beserker or "DemonBreak" or somehin like that, MAN that'd be kool, especialy since "DemonBreaks" use fire magic!
BloodyFrost chapter 13 . 1/28/2006
Yay! You came back!

I was wondering what happened to you. I remember you said you where going to update in a week after the email you sent me.

I kind of figured you were really busy and it looks like I was right. At least some things are lighting up for you and you get to have more free time.

Sorry I haven't been around much lately, especially in the forums, but computer problems can really bite.

See you in the next update! I loved this chapter very much, even though it was shorter then your usall chapters I understand why this was short.

Until next time!

Havenoname signing off!
Orunge chapter 13 . 1/25/2006
Great work and u finally updated :D

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