|Reviews for Twisted Fates|
| slipshod chapter 4 . 12/12/2008
so it's a selkie/mermaid kind of thing? i'm assuming mermaid but am also hoping it's selkie, i can never get enough of those. anyway, yes, it's lovely, lovely and descriptive in a very nice way.
| slipshod chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
ooh, i like this beginning. very intriguing.
| Ardente chapter 5 . 7/28/2006
very nice. this story flows really well, i like it a lot
| Ardente chapter 4 . 7/28/2006
theres a bit of a contradiction here, the mother says that now her name is Arnurna, and then right around there she calls her roisin..
| Ardente chapter 3 . 7/28/2006
very nice, it really flows well, going from the sea witch to the little girl
| Ardente chapter 2 . 7/28/2006
i really liked the description of this chapter, yet im still slightly confused. is all the sea world destroyed? or is it like she's banished somewhere where its all in ruins
| Ardente chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
excellent beginning, very powerful
| dragonfairy2360 chapter 5 . 7/2/2006
I love the story..but i'm a little confused on who the characters are...please continue
| offandaway chapter 3 . 6/18/2006
Chapters too short!
| Simple Thoughts chapter 5 . 6/17/2006
| French tears chapter 4 . 4/16/2006
| cherrichik chapter 4 . 10/21/2005
i see a good story on the way.
| Lady Briseis chapter 4 . 7/8/2005
well you read and reviewed my story and that is why i will review yours.
i really like it and it is well described. but how exactly did the tail go away? are you gonna write about it later?
keep on writing, i am looking forward to the next chapter!
| Ben Alexander chapter 4 . 7/7/2005
Wow! It gets better and better! PLZ UPD8!
| mistyqueen chapter 4 . 7/7/2005
this is a totally wicked story i absolutely love it