Reviews for Twisted Fates
slipshod chapter 4 . 12/12/2008
so it's a selkie/mermaid kind of thing? i'm assuming mermaid but am also hoping it's selkie, i can never get enough of those. anyway, yes, it's lovely, lovely and descriptive in a very nice way.
slipshod chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
ooh, i like this beginning. very intriguing.
Ardente chapter 5 . 7/28/2006
very nice. this story flows really well, i like it a lot
Ardente chapter 4 . 7/28/2006
theres a bit of a contradiction here, the mother says that now her name is Arnurna, and then right around there she calls her roisin..
Ardente chapter 3 . 7/28/2006
very nice, it really flows well, going from the sea witch to the little girl
Ardente chapter 2 . 7/28/2006
i really liked the description of this chapter, yet im still slightly confused. is all the sea world destroyed? or is it like she's banished somewhere where its all in ruins
Ardente chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
excellent beginning, very powerful
dragonfairy2360 chapter 5 . 7/2/2006
I love the story..but i'm a little confused on who the characters are...please continue
offandaway chapter 3 . 6/18/2006
Chapters too short!
Simple Thoughts chapter 5 . 6/17/2006
interesting...but short
French tears chapter 4 . 4/16/2006
update son!
cherrichik chapter 4 . 10/21/2005
i see a good story on the way.

keep going.
Lady Briseis chapter 4 . 7/8/2005
well you read and reviewed my story and that is why i will review yours.

i really like it and it is well described. but how exactly did the tail go away? are you gonna write about it later?

keep on writing, i am looking forward to the next chapter!
Ben Alexander chapter 4 . 7/7/2005
Wow! It gets better and better! PLZ UPD8!
mistyqueen chapter 4 . 7/7/2005
this is a totally wicked story i absolutely love it
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