|Reviews for The Cruciatus|
| Have-Some-Deer-Teeth chapter 1 . 9/13
This was great! Too bad there aren't more chapters.
| LBibliophile chapter 1 . 9/8
Not bad, but I feel like the middle is missing something.
Ron: "In case you didn't notice, he's in to much pain to answer."
Umbridge: "Pain? Then why isn't he crying for mercy?" Stops first curse. (I always thought it was the sort of spell you could only hold one at a time anyway...)
Harry: "Voldemort hits harder."
Umbridge: Second curse
| KTapering chapter 1 . 4/4
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/19
I like this story. Especially, I like that Professor Snape does not need to be Harrys friend. He only acts as a responsible teacher would.
| WizardyWitchy chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
I like this story :)
But really, It is a pity that it's not continued. Indeed it feels like the end of this story is not an end !
I think you have here a story with such a potential !
hope to read you soon
| Melancholy quill chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
Great little piece, always wondered what could have happened, well done.
| MagicWriterK chapter 1 . 8/20/2015
I was half expecting someone to Avada Kedavra that wretched piece of vile scum.
| Rasdra chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
This is way too short -what would the consequences be? At least in your story? (Guessing no trip to the Ministry? -no death or Sirius but also no revelation of Voldemort?)
~Good but more of a snapshot or prompt of an AU than a pneshot
| The Septic Gryff chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
Sorry,I snorted loudly when Neville dropped to the floor in a dead lad...It was kind of funny though :')
| Deelah chapter 1 . 4/28/2015
Type your review here.I loved it very nice
| thingsthatmakeme chapter 1 . 2/20/2015
Really cool idea! I loved Snape's, "HARRY JAMES POTTER!" - worried!Snape is awesome :)
| Moriko chapter 1 . 12/5/2014
Short and very awesome :D
Fast paced and the characters are well shown. I did hope Neville would come out stronger, but hey, that's my opinion. This was good too.
I recommend reading it, it's great :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
I really love the protective snape in this piece!
| FallingNarwhals chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
Wow. A bit OC, but totaly awesome. Maybe you should write a different ending (On another story) where Harry goes crazy instead. That will be awesome!
| Noxy the Proxy chapter 1 . 10/22/2014