Reviews for Lifeless rose |
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![]() ![]() ![]() :-O Whoa. Glad I could help with the last chapter. :-) Dang, she held his head under water...what a way to go. Again, I'm morbidly curious as to how she did in the others. Keep going! -April |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was really to short. But I can't wait to read how you convey the full extent of Minerva other side. Though it's hard to think that she would ever harm Albus. Please don't let Snape be to harsh or if he is let him get what he deserves. Please update soon. JA |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's not hard to picture Minerva being a little unstable under her cool, prim, and proper facade she pulls off. I love the way the story is going. Please update soon.:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely too short! I had a feeling Minerva wouldn't remember actually killing anybody. Is Angerona the only one to find it odd that all the men around Minerva seem to be dropping like flies? Keep going! |
![]() ![]() Woah. That reveiled a side of Minerva I never knew! Oh well, it was fabulous anyway! I loved it! Well written and descriptive. Good job! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes the chapter is a bit here and there. But I can see her sitting on the floor of her cell in Askaban hugging her knees and rocking back and forth. i like the idea that Minerva has a split personality that is dormant until she is angrey or something threatens her. I would really like to see where you take this. JA |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're right, it is sort of a strange chapter, but that's ok. I think the way it's written matches the ramblings of someone who's a bit off their rocker. I could see it. As for what to do with it, maybe you can tell what happened in her life thus far with flashbacks or something. I'm morbidly curious to see where you'll take this. :-) April |