The story was great... though Sirius' hostility was a bit out of character. There is one thing I had to point out - Lily Evans Potter had a friend with the name DORCAS Meadowes and not DorcUs Meadowes.
Overall, I had fun reading the fic.
keep writing :)

This was an amazing read. Well worth reading.

Thank you so much for this story. I loved how you portrayed James as this completely passionate, borderline obsessive boyfriend. Every girl needs a guy like him, one who's not afraid to say "this is the girl I'm going to marry". I just discovered your profile and am now going to read every single one of your Jily fics,,,tnx again

"Her bloodline laced with Veela and Esperantè"
Sorry, but what is esperante? I tried googling it but all I got was a car model, thnx

Dumbledores last words were kinda sad. Lovely but sad. All the same thank you (with as much emotions lily mustered in last paragraph) for this beautiful story

Beautifully written really. I love it especially James. Other characters are nicely portrayed too except maybe Marlene. I don't hear references of Peter too. And as far as I know lily and James weren't aurors, they were just in otp. Frank and Alice though? They were aurors. All the same its quite good

I loved James so damn much. I love the way you clear his POV through Sirius. Thanks for this. I mean the review may not convey every thing I feel but you know what I love you. Thanks.

This has all I've been reading over the past few days. It's brilliant! Captivating and smart canon. I really enjoyed it. Wish there was more!

You have a way with words. Really, keep on writing! This was beautiful.

Crying
I loved this

Lolz xD this was more fun than I thought

My first Jily fic :3

wow! thank you for this fic.

This is great. Poor jealous berk james. Dont worry it will get better.

I don't know why you keep typing "Dorcas" as "Dorcus" unless she is an OC. This is a great story! :)