Reviews for beautiful contradictions
Evelina888 chapter 18 . 6/2/2013
First of all, I really enjoyed this story. You gave a portrayal of Lily that I found very interesting. Also, your portrayal of James' parents was one I'd never read before, so that was fascinating. It seems quite likely that James' parents would be so caught up in their work. The whole thing was as good as the summary promised, and I wish you would continue it.

Second of all, I don't know whether or not you care about flame reviews, but I know that they're never pleasant when I get them, so I just wanted to say that the reason I read your story was because of what the summary promised. I didn't find it boastful. I was just looking for a good LJ story, and yours promised that, so I read it. And it didn't disappoint. :)
InkedPetal chapter 18 . 5/31/2013
I must say, this was a unique story. The writing was terrific, as your summary had promised. Lily and James really show their strengths and weaknesses in a unique, sadistic way. Keep on writing!
InkedPetal chapter 7 . 5/31/2013
They kissed!
InkedPetal chapter 6 . 5/31/2013
AWWWW, JUST KISS ALREADY!
InkedPetal chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
Love it! And the summary!
jilyxo chapter 8 . 5/21/2013
Your story is so interesting and well written!
Omg Catz chapter 8 . 5/19/2013
I love the long chapters! Please keep them and keep writing!M
renata regina chapter 18 . 5/11/2013
Oh I loved this so much. I got so choked up during some parts when I would remember how young they died.
Guest chapter 13 . 4/17/2013
Did they have sex?
PrincessVanya chapter 18 . 4/6/2013
I just finished reading through this entire story, and oh my god, I loved it so much! I can tell that you really put a lot of thought into it, and I was both elated and heartbroken reading your descriptions and developments of all of the characters. Absolutely incredible. Thank you for writing this! :D
MG.rsb chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
i'm sorry

lily was their 'fearless leader'?

wtf?
bluepanda chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
the story is fine, but the summary kind of sucks. there is absolutely nothing about what the story is about, other than the very, very, basics, and mostly it's just extoling your virtues, which no one knows that you have yet, since they haven't read the story, and might not because of the summary.

count this as a flamer if you want
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
the summary really, really, sucks.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
feel free to yell at me, but frankly, the summary kind of sucks. you might want to revise it sometime, because it sounds less like a summary than a boast-a-thon
thestaganddoe chapter 7 . 2/16/2013
I thought the start of this chapter made up for all the crying I did last chapter but then the whole Sirius and Marlene thing got me freaking teary but now they're FINALLY going on a date and I'm so happy. Gosh, this is a bloody rollercoaster
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