Reviews for beautiful contradictions |
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Cherry Chalk chapter 1 . 6/5/2004 COLIO!...UPDATE! SOON!...or i'll...uh...set my Vampire army of the uuhndead after you!~Cherrychalk |
wats up chapter 1 . 6/5/2004 I love this story! update soon, ill be waiting~~ Nice first long chapter too! |
Gulldara chapter 1 . 6/5/2004 Very nice. I think you have the characters pretty much spot on, your pains on working on the characters are greatly appreciated by the readers, I can tell you that for a fact. The last thing anyone want's is a Mary Sue character. A question though:What year are they in? Sorry, that was just annoying me in a very slight way. Update soon. |
MySite chapter 1 . 6/5/2004 Yea the third movie was cool, but nothing compares to the books. Anyway, ur story is really cool. Hope u update soon. ~Amandinka~ |
Aimz chapter 1 . 6/4/2004 I really like this story, it's really cute, and they betting was really funny |
StormAngel13 chapter 1 . 6/4/2004 this is awsome this is defentally my favorite type of story please keep going! |
Jellyman Squirt chapter 1 . 6/4/2004 I liked this, I always enjoy well-written LJ! A couple of things though: surely nearing the end of sixth year, James would have grown up a teeny bit? Also - and this was probably just Lily's prejudice - Lily says that James was arrogant about his background and wealth; I don't think he would be. Insufferably arrogant about his Quidditch skills and intelligence, yes, but I wouldn't have him down as a snob. I loved the betting between Moony, Wormtail and Padfoot! |
Kat44 chapter 1 . 6/4/2004 loved it...write more? the more chapters, the more reviews! -Katherine |
sdkitty chapter 10 . 11/27/2004 -grins- WONDERFUL! Simply marvelous authors notes, I might add. Not to mention they're all extremely true. Class WAS very important to the British people in the 1970's. I happen to have a rather large essay to write about it which is sitting on my desk...ugh! Damn that History of Britan! I love your story, and I expect you to keep up the excellent work! Although there was something in this chapter's comments that bothered me... You stated that they didn't get married or conceive Harry right after Hogwarts, although Aunt Petty clearly states when she's telling Harry about his parents lives that they "got married right out of Hogwarts". Proves I read my A/Ns! _ Sirius: -grins proudly- That's my girl! ...I wish. He's too afraid of commitment...-gazes longingly in the distance- However, a good snog always cheers me up! Speaking of which...-singsong voice- OH SIRI-POO! ~*~sdkitty |