Reviews for Be My Eyes
Guest chapter 3 . 12/16/2014
You should make a sequel to this story! It was getting good, please continue
Darkness chapter 3 . 11/5/2014
Its very good but it should be longer. It's not the best nor the worst. It's more in the middle than anything. It great!
moridash chapter 3 . 11/3/2012
ahhh make a sequal now!
Fang chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Wanna hear a saying that I came up with after reading the story title "A Shadow's Little Light" by xXxJazzy B. RealxXx? You can post this anywere, but please do no claim it as your own or make fun of it. I am very very sensitive about what I write and come up with. Anyway, here is my saying:
"Every Shadow has a Light, and Every Light has a Shadow."
This saying is by: Fang the Hedgewolf (or "Fang", if you prefer.)
jack chapter 3 . 7/17/2012
dbzlover1998 chapter 3 . 3/17/2012
Really really really goooooooooooddddddddd
MarkOfAlitheia chapter 3 . 11/3/2011
Ohhh, this is so good! I LOVE the idea of Amy being a blind amnesiac! Please update!
RaeRaethehedgehog chapter 3 . 9/25/2010
You know, I don't haven't read alot of stories like this.

And I loved your idea.

It was very entertaining seeing Shadow have to deal with a blind person, and it being Amy of all people.

I also wanna add that you're very good with description, another thing I love about a story.

I liked it. Kudos to you! :)
mewfatima chapter 3 . 6/19/2010
please continue the story! xD
mewfatima chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
awww, poor Amy, nice story
Snowlily246 chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Update please!
xXxJazzy B. RealxXx chapter 3 . 11/2/2009
The first chapter was utterly in character - just from head to toe. It was a worthy read, and I was excited to read more...

But I liked this story up until this point - between the second and the third chapter, the story lost its touch, and I was a little disappointed, since this was one of my favorite ShadAmy fics.

By the third chapter, things were knocked into quick and rushed OOC, that OOC focusing on Shadow. For me, that's what made it lose its touch completely, and I kind of prefer it to have stopped at the first chapter, since that's the win-win chapter, and the one that has the hook and line.
Anna Marcelli Palmer chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
This was certainly a very interesting Shadamy story and I

am sure you 've got lots of talent. You did a great job with

the descriptions and the development of the storyline. I would

like the story to be written in first person, because it is powerful and interesting and it would be more realistic and intense that way, but I suppose It was your choice...

Anyway. One really good thing is that it made me wanna know what happens next, which is something very important for a writer to achieve.
Ruby Verfasser chapter 3 . 6/19/2009
Hehe, thanks pinkie. Er, blind pinkie. Just like a newborn mouse. *sighs happily* :3
Ruby Verfasser chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Lol, who's Sonic. I've been meaning to read this story for a while, but I never got around to it. Finally, I can read it. :3
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