|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Undead Alliance|
| pikachucat chapter 18 . 4/9
| X chapter 18 . 2/17
| X chapter 14 . 2/16
Harry/Kari? Ouch! Very punny. Okay, I know it's hari kiri, but it's close enough for a pun.
| shugokage chapter 18 . 12/21/2014
Wow a sad but beautiful ending to this amazing story!
| Xunzar chapter 13 . 8/8/2014
Frankly, I rather think the appropriate response by Harry would be something along the lines of "Yes, I risked the lives of people who are ready to crucify me at the drop of a hat in exchange for a chance to see someone I actually care about." Or something like that. But I'm amazed he hasn't tried to kill his friends.
| atymer chapter 18 . 4/29/2014
Well written, exciting and thoughtful characterizations. If Sirius had been alive as he fell into the veil, Harry would have gone after him. I thought the plot devices very entertaining. I will Fav because it will be a good candidate for a repeat read.
| Um the Muse chapter 18 . 12/30/2013
Bravo! That was a great story, especially the end.
This story also stuck to the original characters extremely well. That is no small feat, especially with the original storyline.
I was wondering if you intentionally named Kari so that together they would form harikari (ok, the ritual suicide is actually called hara-kiri, but often spelled harikari).
I think that Kari needed more screen time because she's such an important part of what motivates Harry in the story,
On your author note, you said that you didn't like your title. It's a nice name, but I don't think that it really fits your story. What about "HP & the Power He Now Knows"?
| rishie chapter 18 . 8/5/2013
Grat story, I really enjoyed it, but it was a little sad at the end. good one though, I had a lot of fun reading this.
| Dark Phoenix Lord chapter 18 . 4/15/2013
Hello! it was a really good history. keep up the good work! cheers
| Goten Askil chapter 18 . 4/2/2013
Good story, it's refreshing seeing Slytherins who are not complete gits, for once.
| Rising Phoenix-82 chapter 18 . 3/24/2013
I cried at the end, but I am glad Harry survived at the end...
| AJ Granger chapter 18 . 3/13/2013
It's an interesting end to the story, and somehow fits. I did not grow so fond of your made up Slytherin Kari, but liked what you were trying to do with that. Just choose a canon character and make it work. There isn't really a need to go beyond that mostly.
I thought the changes in the trio were realistic and understanding. I am a little surprised that Harry didn't seem to catch on to Ginny and how she was acting and why. I don't like when Harry gets with her anyway as she's such a fan girl, and although she dated others, it was only to lure him in by trying to appear to not be a fan girl anymore.
I also thought your portrayal of Hermione was a nice touch. She rarely gets called on for being what she is, but with all her good qualities, she does have some bad ones.
| Soki711 chapter 10 . 2/2/2013
Harry is such a whiner in your story and feeling sorry for himself all the time makes for a poor hero.
| Soki711 chapter 9 . 2/2/2013
I read this story years ago and I keep track of all the stories I read and gave it a 5 out of ten. I didn't know why I gave it such a low mark until I read it again and I think I gave it to high a mark. I think it is worth a 3 for effort. It is so boring and a Slytherin with a Russian or German name would not be in Slytherin. I keep reading hoping it gets better but it didn't so I will sign myself off. Your writing is good but your imagination sucks.
| Soki711 chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
Ron doesn't care for juggles? Yes Hermione's parents are juggles so there would be a problem there.