Reviews for You Only Die Twice
KawaiiAyu chapter 4 . 8/6/2008
KhallieGurl chapter 4 . 6/27/2008
I REALLY hope you're still working on this story, cuz I love it so far! :). It's freaking amazing and I'm touched by all the family-love stuff going on! I love that stuff, man! (As long as it's not completely overdone so that it's ridiculously sappy, but you handle the family-love issue perfectly.) Can't wait for Ch. 5!

Just one picky thing, though, in all the chapters when you say things like "it's strictly for the personal", the correct form of the word is "personnel." At least if you're defining the word in question as "employees".
kellylover chapter 4 . 4/12/2005
Spy Lady X chapter 4 . 10/6/2004
OMG, I'm dying to know how this turns out! Too bad Zach in GS95 was so pathetic (Andy Dick); he should've been more like Zach in this story! :D
chill13 chapter 3 . 9/30/2004
22 should have just left a note.
chill13 chapter 2 . 9/30/2004
What the ?HECK? is he doing in heavan? Max would think something like that. Ha! Poor 99.
erikjacksparrowlupinlove chapter 3 . 7/27/2004
This was pretty good.
lightsabermaster chapter 4 . 7/9/2004
This is a great story. I can't to read the rest!
Lieske chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
I thought that your story is really good. It keeps me on the end of my chair. please hurry up and finish the rest please.