Reviews for Dad?
akosidiabolique chapter 4 . 3/31
The plot is supposedly good but so focused on Harry's long winded explanations. Ironic that the author wrote that Lockhart's book is full of "I's" and ended up writing a fanfic full of "I's", too. And there are parts that Harry will supposedly explain later but dedicated 3 t0 4 paragraphs about it (e.g. "... the Death Eaters hate me... "). The plot is good with a fairly good grammar but somehow tedious to read. It should have more conversations and interactions between the characters and less of Harry's opinions & introspection. I don't usually write this kind of review but I can't help it because this plot has potential. Anyway, I doubt if the author's going to read this, it's been 11 years since the last update. _
Blitza chapter 1 . 1/29
I liked the summary but the first person view ruined it for me just as much as the tone did. Better luck next time.
krystal421 chapter 11 . 12/26/2014
Please update soon!
krystal421 chapter 3 . 12/26/2014
Why did you killed Draco?!
the-weird-box chapter 11 . 12/1/2014
Harry you are just too much
Random person chapter 3 . 7/19/2014
Well then. "Will I have to watch?" "Yes." "Cool! So how will you kill them? Quick, or slow?"
Someone chapter 2 . 7/19/2014
"let me get this straight, you stunned me and kidnapped me, just to break me some news that I have known for weeks?" lol. Voldemorts prob thinking 'srsly!? I did all of that for NOTHING!?' or something along those lines
SlytherinSnake6886 chapter 6 . 2/1/2014
I like the story, but sure, I'll give you a death threat.
You low, idiotic, waste if oxygen! Why, if I knew where you lived, you'd better start counting your blessin's and kissin' yer ass, 'cause I got a dagger and my hit-list is a mile shorter than my already-hit-list.
Was that good enough? By the way, love the story! Skips merrily down the road as if nothing happened
pikachucat chapter 11 . 1/10/2014
awesome more please
PiptheSnake chapter 7 . 12/1/2013
That is a very cruel and unusual torture method... hmmm... i might have to employ that one...
Guest chapter 7 . 7/24/2013
About singing dinosaurs...
I hate you, you hate me
we're a horrible family,
with a surge of hate and a kick from me to you
dont you know I hate you too.

something my son came up with in Gr 2 in 1996
Shadow-hunter93 chapter 7 . 5/23/2013
I laughed so hard at "Howlers are a very important part of every young witch and wizard's life." I could practically see Harry with a finger lifted and a shit-eating grin. Keep it up.
DooweeBipBopBamLookAtThisLamb chapter 11 . 4/11/2013
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saffarinda chapter 11 . 8/21/2012
xD LMAFO I love this story - even though it's been 6 fricken years you must continue. I need to read the parents eveninig thing.

I can imagine Harry 'inocentley' calling Tommy "Daddy" I'm sure it would infuriuate Tommy as he can't use unforgivables in Hogwarts and - quite frankly - scare the Hogwarts studants to death xD The professor's faces, the parents, Hermione and Ginny's would be priceless if Harry latched onto Tommy's arm and dragged him away speaking with a fake lisp xD

Just some ideas - AND FRICKEN UPDATE - Thankyou for writing with us ;) xx
Guest chapter 11 . 6/30/2012
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW THIS IS JUST WWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWW UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOON AND YES IT IS lala looney HERE hahahahahahahaaah wooooooow im mad
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