|Reviews for Out of control|
| a chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
darn. :( you got me excited at first. I thought this would be a different "The Reason".
| Meleny Starr chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
You're evil, this should continue! More and more until theres a good plot ending... well that one was good but it's just sudden and it really should all wrap up in the end and here I am just babbling so you continue the story. I think I'll shut up now - -;;
Anyways as for the dynamics of the story, the plot as said above is excellent. The grammar could use work and the tense might use some improvement but I still enjoyed the story as I do the rest of your writing.
| 913paradox chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
*complete silence* ... um... I LIKED IT! _v good job countess...
guess what! i love my Max. D