|Reviews for How Far|
| slySylvester chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
Update soon plz
| Miss Pessimistic chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
I'm going to try to make this the least flame-ish possible.
I didn't like it because your adjectives are overused, or unnecessary. Believe me, I love large, broadened vocabulary - but your words are so .. yeah, unnecessary. And then, when you have the opportunity to use different words, you're repetive and use the same ones constantly.
Secondly - how out of character were you making them? I mean, I understand if Remus likes Sirius, but he's so.. and Sirius - I totally get how he cares about his reputation and all - but he is /not/ that inconsiderate of his friends. Snogging girls during the day, Remus at night? & thinking it's cool? The hell? I could rant more but I'm not going to.
I know it's your first fanfic which is why I suggest you should've worked on that. Mmkay.
| adari94 chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
omg! I almost cried! It's so good!
| MoonZheng chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
This story was so good.
You wrote their emotion brilliantly! I hope you'll continue this. v
| Umbrae Calamitas chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
You really need to update this! It's amazingly good and I want to read more! You have the characters' personalities so beautifully written and the emotions are played out perfectly. Update, please!
~ Umbrae Calamitas
Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.
| vanity is my name chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Your writing is beautiful. I don't think i have ever found myself entranced like i did with this story. I am terribly sorry to hear that you have put your pens away. I guess one can only hope that you will find your path again. You have an amazing talent anda it would be a shame to see it gathering dust and cobwebs. But i must admit, your pen name is what entrigued me the most...may i enquire as to your inspiration for it? If you want, just email me...if your wrist is well enough, of course. ...once again, im sorry to hear of your resignation. I hope you return.
| remuslives23 chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
I love this story. Such a simple premise but really effectively done. I love the idea of testing Sirius like that. Sweet.
| Araea Swiftwind chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
Oh, J'adore! C'est bonne! Ma favourite!
| Falcon's Jade chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
Argh, Sirius you self-centered bastard, Remus better not weaken against him. Please update this! It's excellent and well written and everything!
| StormDarkblade chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Wahh~~ this so better not be a one-shot ;_; I hope it isn't so bad! You have to update this!
Sirius is so conceited in this, poor Moony ( I hope(if you update) that they'll get together though. ;;
| Black-Luna chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
hey i dont no y u have stopped writing, but dont. continue writing this story. its getting very interesting. really! keep it up. it seems that the others do 2. update next chapter soon.
| Goddess of Idun chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
you should update this! it's really good. sirius is a bastard. thank goodness for james.
| GoldenFyre chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
. What a bittersweet story. I hope you update soon. I really like the story (my bff thinks I'm crazy, to like angsty storys, even if they do have a happy ending)poor poor Remie, Sirius is a bit of a pinhead, no? Ah well, update soon please!
| puffskein chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
Is this a one-shot or will you continue? Please do, it's great!
| Tama-Kitsune chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
T_T Damn, I'm so depressed that this is only one-part. I would have loved to read more if it. Although, it was none the less great.