Reviews for The owner's Daughter
Ashley chapter 2 . 3/12/2006
I love the story line and it is a good idea but you need to develop your plot points and characters more and your conversations especially during chapter 2 which is really confusing. Who is Chris?
trinity-matrix-13 chapter 8 . 9/2/2004
Aw...that was such a sweet ending. This was a great story...really suspenseful. You're obviously a talented writer.
georgesgurl117 chapter 8 . 6/20/2004
Wow! Great story!
Steph chapter 7 . 6/12/2004
It's a great story. Not quite sure why you're having problems deciding what to do with it next. Seems like a logical choice would be to the hospital considering that Catherine was just raped, beated, and stabbed several times. There's the whole aspect of her recovery, both physical and psychological, to deal with. Plus, what about Gil's reaction to what happened to her? Hope those ideas help so that the story will come to an ending that you are more happy with.
DefyingSantaFe chapter 4 . 6/7/2004
Wow! I like it so far!
Sarah chapter 4 . 6/7/2004
Oh wow! Great fic! I never did like Chris, so I really like how you've made him into a psycho here. You've left us at a pretty suspenseful moment here so I hope that you're ready to post another chapter very soon.
anonymous chapter 4 . 6/7/2004
very good fic so far,

you have some spellimng mistakes but no one is perfect.

I am liking this, fic , I was not much of a fan of cath's boyfriend, anyway

let's go with the next chapter i am dying to know what happens to cath.