Reviews for Firecracker |
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![]() ![]() ![]() COOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed out loud so hard when Jack piped up near the end! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Jack Sparrow in this one! He's like a perverted big brother to Will and Elizabeth, and I really like that. I love the Will/Liz fluff, too, but a Jack like yours is really one in a million... Faves. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job; I really enjoyed this fic! Jack was characterized so well, and I loved his dialogue and interactions with Will! Well done! :) -TET |
![]() ![]() That was beautifully done! I just love WillElizabeth fics, I wish there were more. And Jack was hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jack is SO hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You rock! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it. um... sequel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That story was one of the best i've read in a LONG time. Love the whole concept, you MUST write a sequel! *coughWEDDINGNIGHTcoughcough* ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Elegant, lively, humorous, and very in character. I love the conversation in the tavern, and the flashback to Will and Elizabeth's childhood. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is...incredible. i don't know what else to say except bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "teacher, i have a question." i say "is it just possible for this author to write another chapter?" "why of corse it is." says some lady, "and im sure if she dosent, we can start an angry mob!" okay, you heard my review. so could you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heehee! Yummy! That story was COOL! I loved it! You know what could be a good lil sequel or something? How about a wedding night one-shot for Will and Liz... hm...*winks at Dala1* HEHE! Great stuff! You should really think about that, though. You're really good at it! |
![]() ![]() This is a really nice story. I have to agree with the others, your characterizations are spot on (especially Jack-a lot of people are content with having Jack repeating movie lines, but you captured the essence of Johnny's performance and made it believable in your own words). I loved the bit with Will and Elizabeth as kids, it's something that I haven't seen done often or well enough. Overall, a great little gem of a story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have great talent. I enjoy reading your stories. This and "Ankles All the Way" is very good. I've never laughed so hard in my life until I read Jack saying, "I'm asleep! Deeply asleep. I might be dead. Carry on." I commend you for your work. Please write more of "Ankles All the Way!" *pokepokeprodprod* |