|Reviews for Links in a Chain|
| guesttt chapter 38 . 11/1/2014
At first I thought it was just boring .. Too much fluff .. Saw sov many things that were OOC .. Syaroan crying? Over use of warrior and cherry bloßsom ... Was boring for some time ...But all in all good story ,.. Nice plot ..
| trekker4life chapter 15 . 5/3/2014
I'm reading this again for like the fourth time, and every single time, Nightmare's line is one of my favorites - "How far into denial do you have to be to not realize your aura is making moves on your girl before you do?" So appropriate for so many fandoms.
| kori kaoru himura chapter 45 . 4/27/2014
I am not sure what to say about this story, it is long and very original and I really enjoyed it. This is my first fanfic I read on CCS in about 10 or more years. Very recently did I watch the series on youtube and chose to go back to this website. I am very impressed by your story because you developed new characters and gave them extraordinary personalities. I especially enjoyed the interaction between Sakura and Syaoran and how they became "one" and were able to be masters to all the cards. The little details you added throughout the story not only with Life and Death but also from a "magical" stand point such as the Looking room was amazing! I was very surprised that you took the little info from the series and provided further explanations in your own story such as why Toya had powers and that we knew he was destined to give them awayamong other instances.
My favorite chapters were the first ones because you showed more "special" moments with my favorite couple but that seemed to decrease somewhat as the story ran its course. Likewise, I was a bit taken aback by the fact that Tomoyo ended up having magical powers, not so sure how I feel about that one, but I did like that she played an important role in purifying Pain because I do admit it symbolized a lot as she always tried to be supportive and helpful to her friends despite her lack of magical powers.
I really enjoyed the story and thank you for sharing it to this audience, I absolutely loved the spirits and their personalities and how Sakura and Syaron got to grow closer (even tough they died :( ). I wish there was more fluff in regards to the SxS couple especially at the end of the story but it remained very original nonetheless.
Well done! I will be looking forward to reading more of your stories!
| Unknown chapter 45 . 4/9/2014
This story has inspired me to wrie a fic of my own,. I had the idea for the story for about 10 years. But you inspired me to write it,. Thank you for the inspiration, I will start posting the fic next month onwards.
| Neko Satashi chapter 18 . 7/24/2013
"Ack- no! Not for kid's eyes!" Nightmare yelped and grabbed Lost by the back of his robes and covered the boy-spirit's eyes.
"Hey! Let me go! What are they doing! What's happening?" Lost yelled as he struggled in Nightmare's grasp.
Nightmare averted his own eyes and knew that if he could blush he would be doing so at that very moment. "This isn't something that a child should see…"
Lost squirmed angrily. "We were created at the same time! I'm as old as you are, you big jerk! Let me go!"
"Sakura… I- I-."
"Yes, Syaoran?" Sakura asked hopefully, leaning in closer.
"I'm in l-l-."
"NIGHTMARE! MISS SAKURA AND MR SYAORAN ARE AWAKE!"
ARE U FREAKIN KIDDING ME!?
| Neko Satashi chapter 9 . 7/21/2013
"SAKURA! I KNOW YOU ARE THERE! THE CHINSES GAKI BETTER NOT HAVE DONE ANYTHING TO YOU! YOU BETTER GET HOME NOW OR YOU ARE BOTH DEAD!" "End first message."
"Second message…" This time is was Kero.
"HEY BRAT! I KNOW YOU HAVE SAKURA THERE YOU BETTER SEND HER HOME! Oh wait she was cover in cuts and bleeding everywhere… YOU BETTER ESCORT SAKURA HOME RIGHT NOW! DON"T MAKE ME COME OVER THERE OR I'M GONNA OPEN A CAN OF WHOOP ASS ON YOU!" "End second message."
Ahaha Touya and Kero too protective of our little and dense and naïve saku haha
| Adorable Hazel chapter 45 . 1/30/2013
Awesome story...I really really liked it. Thanks for sharing it. It was so fascinating.
| CalcBoy91 chapter 45 . 9/28/2012
Hmm, now that everything is wrapped up, the title seems so appropriate. It's an intricate story with so many underlying themes to it. I don't know how to convey how much I enjoyed reading the plot, but I must emphasize that it was the story itself that I enjoyed. I understand that this story was completed years back and you are unlikely to change anything but there are certain parts in the story that I cringed inwardly at. However, it was the grammatical and syntactical errors that made me feel uncomfortable.
On a rating, I would give this a 9.5 out of 10 just for the grammar and syntax. Otherwise, I would like to congratulate you on a very well written and thoroughly thought out story. Cheers!
| CalcBoy91 chapter 43 . 9/27/2012
The other seven Sakura spirits.
| CalcBoy91 chapter 33 . 9/24/2012
Well, that's a new way to put the term "bittersweet". :)
| CalcBoy91 chapter 24 . 9/23/2012
I say it was Seduce! :)
| CalcBoy91 chapter 13 . 9/21/2012
Let me guess, the 'real' nightmare clow card.
| CalcBoy91 chapter 4 . 9/21/2012
you do realize that all of your (comments) are unnecessary and just take up space correct?
| SoShi Love x3 chapter 45 . 9/6/2012
Ehrmagerd. I know I'm a couple years late for this story, but I just finished it and it is so good! I seriously pictured sorrow and illness as Maru from xxxholic but in different colors. I almost cried when the seven spirits died. And as soon as the items were shown, I knew they were coming back so I was happy. Love what you did with them. Overall, this was a very complex story that is completely believable within the ccs universe. You have my praises. Great job!
| Guest chapter 45 . 7/3/2012
that was the most amazing story ever!
you are a wonderful writer!:)