Reviews for Message in a Bottle
Guest chapter 19 . 3/29
This is one of the most poorly written fanfic's I've ever read and I don't know how I even managed to stomach the 17 chapters that I've read but I'll stop now. No character development, totally illogical plot and very uncharacteristic behaviour, and the so called love between Draco and Hermione is moving too fast. Plus, the dialogues suck. The idea itself is somewhat interesting but you've failed completely at bringing it to life. I'm sorry for being rude, I'm usually much more polite, but you've just butchered my otp so I've taken the liberty. I don't have anything against you as a person but you really should work on your writing
Guest chapter 27 . 3/2
this was a great story
Yvonne Park chapter 27 . 2/25
Good story! I've never read one with voldie being Hermione's dad before. Very interesting. You did a good job with it! :)

-Yvonne
Spaghetti face23 chapter 16 . 2/21
Needs more
Guest chapter 27 . 2/11
:-)
Hotmamantx chapter 27 . 2/6
Wow . What a ride
AnonymousBliss chapter 27 . 10/24/2015
Although this story started off strong, completely captivating me, it began to weaken with each passing chapter. The story line sped up, making it feel much too rushed I stead of flowing and keeping me entertained. I loved the plot, buy at the end I was thoroughly confused and had several unanswered questions. The first night they became intimate, what all did the spell entail, "being more then either of them knew"? What was up with Harry's visions, the two doors?
dramioneshipper1999 chapter 6 . 9/2/2015
I JUST WANT TO HUG DRACO SO BADLY! THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC AND I'M DYING OF LOOOOOOVE AND CUTENESS AND SADNESS AND AND AND TOOO MUCH EMOTIONS!
katheringrace chapter 11 . 12/7/2014
I know you are probably going to hate me for this, but she couldn't be a pureblood if Tom Riddle is her father. Voldemort was a hypocrite because he was a half-blood that wanted pureblood supremacy...but it's a good story, just the facts don't add up.
MaiWishes chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
Thats all she does? Write a fucking letter? Pathetic.
wannabewyler chapter 14 . 7/27/2014
hi just found this story (going through old ones that are completed because it makes me happy) and it might have already been said but this isn't realistic without apparition. Hogsmeade, Diagon Alley and Knockturn Alley are far away. Hogwarts is in Scotland, meaning so is Hogsmeade and Diagon Alley is in London as is Knockturn Alley - now fair enough if they apparated but then you forgot to mention it and it thoroughly confused me
marthapreston4 chapter 11 . 7/21/2014
I knew that owl that they were sharing would be important
marthapreston4 chapter 10 . 7/21/2014
glad they are in the same place I wonder how long it will take them to figure out
marthapreston4 chapter 2 . 7/21/2014
awww I like how you established each characters story I love message idea I wonder how they are going to come together
hello chapter 27 . 5/4/2014
wow, wow, wow, just wow
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