Reviews for A Brother's Bond
Hazlov chapter 2 . 6/9/2004
wow that is a good story
EntropyMage chapter 2 . 6/9/2004
This is a very well written story! I cannot wait until you update next. I greatly enjoy the fact that there are many factors contributing to this story and it is not, as many tend to be, a single plot
Rene chapter 2 . 6/9/2004
Oh, such a wonderful story here! Wow...what are those humans up to? GAH!

Anyway, I love yer style, it flows nice and smooth, like a warm cup of Cam-buls chicken noodle soup on a cool, blustery winter day! LOL

Yeah, I like your dialogue between the TMNT's and the humans; very natural and not the least bit tweaked. Very canon to the characters. Good job!

I can't for the life of me find anything wrong except the time between updates! But, if that m eans you're taking your time to insure quality, then I can be patient!

Well, waiting for more so I can breath again!

Be blessed.
Pretender Fanatic chapter 2 . 6/9/2004
I love the way you write Raph! Most people get him real mad at the begining but you have him done to the dime! Great job! I already said that I loved the flashbacks didn't I? They really add to the story. Great job KUTGWUS

Pretender Fanatic
TornChick chapter 2 . 6/9/2004
what a cute chapter. go on
Raphangela chapter 2 . 6/8/2004
Awesome! I love how Mikey was always there for his bro when they were little. _ I wonder what Raph thinks. Hm... I wish he'd help his bro a little more. Again, I love it! Keep up the great work! :D
Chibimax chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
hey cool chap

review soon ;)
Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
Please continue! I love Mikey, especially when he's bonding with his brothers: particularly the Raphael and Mikey moments. Good job. Please continue!
Angel Tifa chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Excellent, I love the way you flashedback to earlier moments, but with a nice transition. Chapters are just long enough so it was worth reading, another thing that drew me in. I hate reading short chapters ._. keep up the great work, please continue, I can't wait to find out what happens next. D
Pretender Fanatic chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Aww! Poor Mikey! I love the flashbacks! I also like the denial and all that. This has really peeked my intrest! I loved loved loved the way you mixed the past with the present, a great move! KUTGWUS (Keep Up The Great Work Update Soon)Pretender Fanatic
sozei chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
This looks like it is going to be a good one. Keep it up. sozei
TornChick chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
I love this story. Please continue soon
Rene chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Ah, a great start! And who is that...? Not gonna say, cuz someone might read the review before the chapter! So, go read it, will ya, cuz this is one good beginning!

Waiting to exhale - because I'm holding my breath for the next update!

Oh, as far as critiquing this, nothing to complain about.

"You have the gift,

you really do,

not much to complain,

so I'll say 'adieu'! :0)

Okay, bad poetry, but - it's the truth!

Be blessed.
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