Reviews for Diamond
rabbit16 chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
love it love it love it
Kimiski chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Aw...thats so sweet! I WUUVV chibi Diamond! *squeez*
snocap chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Well, generally it is very well written. Your words are spelled correctly and you used propper grammer. But, at the beginning I just got a little confused because he is just out there in the rain. To me, it seemed like you needed to specify what Diamond is doing out in the rain. Like, is he taking a walk, did he pass out, or is he just sitting there on the ground spacing out? Overall, I enjoyed reading this first chapter. Please continue!

JuliaBlu chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
This story was very descriptive in Diamond's feelings. I like to visualize things as I read them. All in all it was very good. Keep up the good work!