Reviews for Hotohori's Deceit
mysranuel chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
i like it! it is good and i look forward to reading on!
HoshiHikari chapter 12 . 7/17/2004

neat... if i remeber, is this the last chapter? Or are you going to contiue...please contiue
Nyan Nyan chapter 12 . 7/12/2004
Wonderful story, continue to write you're great at it. There was one thing that was out of place though. Hotohori's holy sword wasn't given to him until Episode 25...or 26 when they failed to summon Suzaku the first time (beforehand he just had a regular sword). And up at the top it said that it was taken place before the ceremony.

I admit, it was an easy mistake to make and I just know realized it after reading your whole story. Btw, please correct me if I'm wrong (my email is above)

Great story anyways, and I just have to say that writing technique is much to be desired.
HoshiHikari chapter 10 . 7/5/2004


con. to update
Twilight Sky chapter 8 . 7/5/2004 was in a state of illusion? Everyone's accounted for...

I'm in suspense!

Keep up the good work!

~Twilight Sky
HoshiHikari chapter 8 . 7/3/2004

upload more
whiteangelguardian chapter 7 . 7/3/2004
wow! great story! continue soon! asap! poor hotohori...*sniff*
HoshiHikari chapter 7 . 6/30/2004

so...good...still a great fic


Twilight Sky chapter 7 . 6/30/2004
*nods slowly* So ... Miaka's nowhere to be found. Oh my goodness, you're spinning this web of a plot thicker and thicker! It's getting so exciting!

And by the way, you update so quickly! I compliment you on that-you must have a lot of spare time on your hands.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

~Twilight Sky
Twilight Sky chapter 6 . 6/29/2004


Miaka's still alive? whew!

That last part with Mitsukake and Hotohori was funny!

Lemme get things straight. So...everything Hotohori experienced was a dream? it something else... only you can answer that!

I'm looking forward to the next update!

~Twilight Sky
HoshiHikari chapter 6 . 6/28/2004


HoshiHikari chapter 5 . 6/25/2004
duh! course that's his wishes

update soon (since its already written out in the first place)
Twilight Sky chapter 5 . 6/25/2004
This was another excellent chapter! I'm glad Mitsukake came into the picture.

Where did Miaka go? Did she live from the heavy wound? (This is still quite possible, though it is 1/10 of a chance -;)

I'm glad you updated so quickly! I'm waiting for the next one!

~Twilight Sky
Twilight Sky chapter 4 . 6/24/2004
...oh my goodness...that was good.

Poor Hotohori-you're so wonderful with descriptions. I got the mood exactly-the stress, the tension, the pain. You did such an excellent job.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

~Twilight Sky chapter 4 . 6/15/2004

wow...its still so good...though its exactly the same as before...

quite refreshing and unforgetable...ispirational too!

haha...koji's knock knock just the way as its suppose to be...
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