Reviews for Witness
Geko chapter 21 . 5/30
That was a good story. Kind of felt like it was written for a different fandom and you just changed the names, though... But yeah, it was good. Very thrilling, especially the grand finale.
Mal chapter 5 . 4/17/2017
hell yeah i like it! :d
Mal chapter 3 . 4/17/2017
omg. this is really good. grabbing first few chapters. You've done a great job in drawing me in.
ThoseWhoLiveWithoutLove chapter 21 . 1/15/2017
Absolutely brilliant; there's no other word for this story. I thought Vegeta was too cheesy and mushy mushy for my liking but Bulma's characterisation was amazing. She was so strong and self sufficient rather than the typical damsel in distress that the heroine is always expected to be, and even in the end she saved herself rather than waiting for her "white knight". I totally loved that. And also it was completely thrilling from the beginning to the end. Great job.
TinkStar87 chapter 21 . 6/4/2016
This was a terrifying and amazing read. Really had me on the edge of my set. I wasn't sure if i would like it because it's AU, but then again some of my favorite stories on this site are AU. SO i thought, what the heck; Glad i did. Thanks for posting. Hope you do more DBZ stories in the future. Til then, Read ya Later ;)
jennifer975 chapter 21 . 5/24/2016
I really loved this story, I read the whole thing in two days! I can't believe I've never come across it before. Thanks so much for sharing!
Satisfied Reader chapter 21 . 5/24/2016
Epilogue? Like an unexpected pregnancy the first time they had sex that resulted in Trunks? Just a thought. GREAT STORY THOUGH! I'm so happy you finished it
elianni chapter 21 . 5/7/2016
Just finished reading this story and I just wondering if u will b writing another bulma and veveta fic i hope u do u were great
Jessica chapter 21 . 5/7/2016
Very good story! Sad it's over, was kind of wishing Goku and Chichi would get together as well. But you kept it on B&V.
Guest chapter 21 . 5/7/2016
Yes, love it so much! It was one my fav stories and I'm glad you continued til the end. There are so many good fictions that remain unfinished. I really liked the plot of this story, and the interactions between Bulma and Vegeta during the investigation.
wistfulmuse chapter 21 . 5/7/2016
Awwww..I just found this..fell in looooovewuth it..and it's over.. *insert sad face

I hope you'll continue writing, whenever you have the time!
Sade chapter 21 . 5/6/2016
Yes finally! And a good ending it was!
Maiika chapter 21 . 5/6/2016
So, I just read this whole story in a couple days. It really had me hooked! I loved the crime aspect of it and the Gochi side story that seemed to be developing, but that plot point never came to fruition, which I have to say was frustrating at the end (even though Goku had a different girlfriend at the beginning who was never mentioned again, so I never really knew if that relationship was going somewhere), but it was a tease! I'd like to know what book/author this is based off. Other than that, I do have to comment that some characters, especially Vegeta were very OOC, in appearance and personality (repeated descriptions of Vegeta being tall and more muscular than Goku, and him using the term "sweetheart" admittedly made me cringe), but I really loved the story overall! It was a great read. Thank you for sharing.
vegeta and future trunks chapter 21 . 5/3/2016
Glad you finally updated but what you mean The End?! I really enjoyed this chapter but for it to end right now whyyyyyy?! Don't be cruel! I wanna see yamcha's sentencing, bulma's and vegeta's engagement, the expectancy of trunks! Come on! please continue!(cries)... at least a follow up chapter! I'm glad yamcha finally got caught and bulma is alright but I would still like for things to play out for bulma and vegeta. I was like awww when vegeta asked for bulma to marry him! How cute. Still don't want it to end :'( I was hoping chi and goku got together too, they were both funny in this chapter ;) Please reconsider
Huntress of Flames 55 chapter 20 . 10/27/2015
Updated! Soon please!
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