ARHG! Tell me about it. If that show was REAL humans would be so dead several thousand times over.

Well, fortunately, Starfleet got it's act together. And that young cadet was able to say " I TOLD YOU SO!" happily and loudly to his former teacher (presumably at her funeral)

Brilliant.

lol, what a scream. so true too. NCC-1701-D looks all hulking and warshippy but those points are xtremely valid. but it would be too easy for the enterprise to win all the dramamtic battles if they had armour and cloaks. funnee. are you planning on doing another chapter or was that just a bit of amusing pointer-outers?

Lol! That was hilarious! Write more stories like this! I think most any Trekkie smart aleks dream, to smart off to a Starfleet officer!...

“Not to mess with our ship, sir?

so im looking around fictionpress and im checking out Mbwun's page to see if he's got any good old stuff i can read since he hasnt made any new stuff in a few weeks...well, i look at his webpage on that little webpage thing and see his fanfiction page. Well, me being the curious one, i click on it and get all his stuff. None of it looks interesting but when i go to his favorite authors list, i see RCS. Well, again, being curious, i cant help but click on ur name. So i click on it and get ur page, which i had no idea ever existed. lucky for me, u just added something to it today. so i click on the new entry and read it...now for the actual review.

well, it definitely made me laugh. i know nothing about star trek but it still made me laugh. i might come back to this page sometime, but i think ill mostly stick with fictionpress...

~Militarynut32489

This is classic! The only thing missing is that in TNG Simpson would either have ended up in the brig or running the resurgent Maquis!

“You’ll probably stick me in a red shirt anyway.