Reviews for New Changes
Aina Saiga chapter 3 . 1/26
DaijoukaAre you okay?

I think you mean 'Daijoubu?'
Or 'Daijoubu desu ka?'

just wanted to say...
so far its interestingI'll read on.
TruckersWife chapter 33 . 6/13/2019
sequel title "More Changes" or "Newer Changes" not creative, but simple and matches the name to know it's a sequel
akswimmer97 chapter 3 . 4/24/2019
Your storyline is interesting, but respectfully your quality of writing makes it a little difficult to continue reading. Consider having someone else read over it for grammatical errors and whatnot before posting updates. Also, double check your Japanese before trying to use the words. I would recommend not using anything more than hai, Iie (iie I know the capitalization makes it look weird), and arigatou. If you do choose to use other words do check with someone who knows the language for proper spelling and usage. For example when you say, “Daijouka” I believe you mean “daijoubudesuka”, which is the proper spelling and a tad more formal which I think maybe you’ll be more appropriate for how you use it. If not and you prefer the less formal, it’s “daijoubu?”. I think this story has potential, and I hope you’ll take this as constructive criticism
PawnStarr chapter 33 . 12/24/2018
Thank you for the lovely read. Rarely have I Ioved all the characters portrayed in the story.
PawnStarr chapter 33 . 12/24/2018
Thank you for the lovely read. Rarely have Ioved all the characters portrayed in the story.
SraelynnBeta chapter 7 . 12/13/2018
I am so confused. does Sesshomaru have 1 arm or 2? earlier you mentioned he had his arms crossed, but then Rin asked why he only has 1 arm. now he is crossing his arms again. it would be nice if there was a bit more consistency.
MoonGoddess111 chapter 2 . 6/25/2018
It's iie not lie for no in Japanese.
Mariselo chapter 33 . 11/9/2017
But what happened to the shikon,she didn't have. Time to make the famous wish. Other than that this is a lovely storu. Well done
Mariselo chapter 21 . 11/9/2017
This is a very sweet story. You show a slow development in their relationship very properly but seshamaru being a virgin what happens to his instint and the heat? Kags looks weak. She doesn't show her ability
Marlene472 chapter 2 . 10/15/2017
No is not spelled lie, it is spelled iie.
acetwolf94 chapter 33 . 6/5/2017
Dragongrail85 chapter 33 . 3/6/2017
Really good you should make a sequel where ecaro finds love
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 33 . 12/25/2016
This story was amazing and I enjoyed it, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
gamersweetheart chapter 31 . 10/18/2016
Why do I feel like something is happening at her home...
gamersweetheart chapter 30 . 10/18/2016
Well 2/3 down!
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