Reviews for A Thing in His Hand
Hall chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
It's better for you to change Cordelia's name to Harmony, because that's who is more like here. People easily confuse the two characters, so for that, this was an OK fic. An advice would be to read more Cordelia-centric stories outside of this site, it will help your writing trust me!
aikakone chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
You've really seemed to capture the characters' voices for that time frame. Good job.
ProfessorSpork chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
Heeheehee. Very amusing- poor, poor Giles. No respect, I tell ya.
mistymidnight chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
I liked it. Cordelia was great, as was Giles. The nurses were hilarious. "Nellie, come take a look at this..."
lil badass chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
loved it
Fred God of chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
Nice fic and very acurate description of Cordy. though i think the purple and yellow bleding was a little unrealistic
MBB chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
:-) LOL
Imzadi chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
This is so very Cordelia, and I think you've got Giles down pat, too. And that's just the way it is in hospitals nowadays. Insurance information first, treatment later! Good, good story.