|Reviews for When Brown Eyes Meet Blue|
| Kingdom's Oathkeeper chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
It was nice :))
| Court12 chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
Aw... I love it, it was so cute and sweet!
| TinyClownBean1 chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
Aww...thats really good. Tee hee why did u ryme at the beginning? Just wondering but hey I liked it all...very good job.
| Black-Lightniing chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
...Its cool! i like the alternating Pov's. you may have a bit of trouble with the tenses...like 'is' where you could have put 'are'...just a few little things. overall, its pretty good!
| Seren147 chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
Nice! I liked the ryming, it was a nice twist to the story! I've never come across that before...but I liked it!
| VeryShortMidget chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
Thanks for contacting me and telling me about your fics. I really apreciate it and I am reading them. I loved this one shot. Keep up the good work! Excellent...Thank you
| cheerful-angel57 chapter 1 . 7/31/2004
Whoah! That was fast! You know, for a first fanfic, that was pretty cool! Hope you write more SetoXSerenity fics because I love reading them! :) And I like the title... Anyway, interesting story! Sorry I wasn't able to review earlier... ok that's all, bye!
| Smurf Cat chapter 1 . 7/20/2004
First fanfic ever huh? Well, it was pretty poetic at the beginning. I like that In a fic. you should have grouped all their feelings together instead of kept changing perspectives. also, you changed tense a lot. That sort of thing really bugs me, but like you said, it's your first fanfic ever. ugh... you shoulda seen MY first fanfic ever! It was a Zelda fic... Ok, let's not atlk about it.
anyhow, I think you ahve a lot of potential. If you would like me to BETA this, meaning proofread ita nd point out errors to help you correct it, I could definately do taht for you! then you could repost it. seems I'm doing that with a lot of my older works now days...
Anyway, keep it up! You WILL get better I promise!
| Spaz913 chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
That was really kawaii! - I've never read a fic written like that before. Good job!
| Neethu chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
So cute! I Love it. keep up the good work!_
| nkitty29 chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
I love it! So cute and well written. Keep it up!
| Lass chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
So cute! I really liked it! It's a very good piece of work, I'd say!