Reviews for Wings of the Dark
G1 Daughter Of Optimus-Elita chapter 1 . 3/14/2015
Please update is this G1 transformers? xxx
Haku chapter 10 . 4/18/2008
A new chapter? I had previously given up on this. Please update soon!
spideydance chapter 10 . 3/31/2008
Yay! An update! I love this story. I can't wait to meet these new (or not so new?) characters! :)
Mobile Holmes chapter 10 . 3/31/2008
WOW! More of Wingwraigth's past & the appearance of someone from the past? TOO COOL!
HolocronIacon421B chapter 9 . 8/1/2007
Couple a chapters in ya give Ariel a human form,sexier curves,and "D" cup breasts.

Nice description.
Lexi chapter 9 . 7/16/2007
i really like this story...i hope that you complete it...please do cause im dying to know wat happens next?
dmc87 chapter 9 . 6/29/2007
Wow, this story is beautiful! I hope you continue it. :)
TatsuraChan chapter 9 . 6/14/2006
Sweet an update! I likt this story a lot!
Jt chapter 9 . 3/5/2006
This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I have a suggestion that you read through your story before you post it, so there are no grammar mistakes. I'm not trying to be mean so don't get mad at me I'm just trying to help.
spiritprime chapter 9 . 2/25/2006
you took a long time to put up the next chapter but i don't blame you so keep up the good work
MajesticBurn chapter 9 . 2/25/2006
Interesting; Romeo-Juliet kind of undertone, but overall very good. And I guess Ariel Pax IS a really common name for Optimus' daughter... anyway, nice work up to this point.
Master Solo chapter 9 . 2/25/2006
I like this fic alot, despite that I'm not usually into Autobots. More, soon? I relly want to see Ariel with Wingwraith.
ShadowDrygan04 chapter 9 . 2/25/2006
hm wingwrraith has a story to tell but what will it be about hmm well i love this story it rocks and i can't wait for the next chapter please write it soon please
Mobile Holmes chapter 9 . 2/24/2006
ah... young love! WingWraith's innocence is SO cute and adorable!
ShadowDrygan04 chapter 8 . 2/11/2006
so the heart of the maiden came from wingwraith himself this is getting really good please write the next chapter soon please
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