|Reviews for Ranma Pegasus, knight of pluto|
| Lamorak Korving chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Ranma Pegasus, knight of Pluto. Chapter 3: Secrets & Revelations. Ranma stared at Setsuna
as if she had grown two extra heads. "Hotaru-EXTREMELY powerful?" he asked doubtfully. Hotaru
said, "Yes. I have the power to destroy a whole planet". Suddenly, a feminine but majestic female voice said, "Our son is no slouch when it comes to power, either. For I am Ranma''s true mother, Amaterasu Oomikami". Setsuna asked, "Ranma, is this true? And if it is, who is
your father?" Ranma replied, "Yes, it's true. And my father is Kami-sama!" Chapter 3: Son of
Kami-sama. "Kami-sama is your father?" Horaru asked, stunned. Ranma said, "Yeah, and when I
get hold of Toltiir, the God of Chaos, I'll make him wish he'd never been born!" Setsuna asked, "Ranma, Hotaru has a very weak constitution. Could you heal her?" "What do you say, father?" Ranma yelled. Pluto asked, "What's that giant block in the sky, Ranma?" Ranma looked up, and said, "It's one of dad's e-mails, and if it hits any Senshi, they won't get up again".
Getting the hint, Pluto yelled, "RUN!" They did so-just in time! Taking Hotaru gently by the hand, he took her to his father's e-mail. "W-what d-d-does it say?" she asked. Ranma brushed off the dust before reading aloud the Heavenly script. "To Ranma Saotome, God of Order
First Class, First Category, Unlimited. My Son, your Mother Amaterasu and I are extremely pleased with you, because aside from the fact the girl you have befriended is Sailor Saturn, Hotaru Tomoe is your long-lost cousin. By all means cure her. I have augmented your powers to allow you to do this. The girl has been lonely for 30,000 years, so please be her friend and guardian angel. Delighted, Kami-sama". Sailor Mars watched as Ranma gently picked up Hotaru and said softly, "Hotaru, dear cousin, you will never be alone again, or lack friends. I offer you my friendship and protection. Do you accept?" "Oh, yes. please!" she said, hugging him tightly. Ranma smiled tenderly on the small girl, and Pluto also smiled. This looked like the beginnings of a beautiful friendship.
| Lamorak Korving chapter 2 . 7/8/2012
While this story started out well, I cannot say I'm impressed with the author's
failure to provide a second chapter. So I guess the task falls to me, and I've
been writing my own original fiction for 35 years! So here goes. Chapter 2:
Setsuna's Decision. Hotaru looked at Ranma, then said tentatively, "Will you be
my boyfriend?" Ranma turned to the source of the voice. She looked small and
lonely and misunderstood. He sensed a kindred spirit in her, and then and there
made his decision. "Sure! You're very kawaii, after all!" he said, unaware that
Setsuna Meioh, Haruka Tenoh and Michiru Kainoh had been watching. They were
pleased to say , with the trace of a smile on her face, "Really? You really think
I'm kawaii?" Ranma laughed, "Yes, I mean it!" "What's your name?" she asked
eagerly. "Himura. Ranma Himura, formerly Ranma Saotome. I was adopted by
Nodoka's parents, who are my grandparents. They punished my former mother by striking her off the family register, and adopted me as their heir, Ranma
Himura. Could you help me out of this crater?" Setsuna, Haruka & Michiru were fascinated with what they had learned, and heard Hotaru say, "I wish I ciuld,
but I'm not strong enough, Mister Himura". Haruka said, "Do you want him as
your boyfriend, Hotaru?" Before she could reply, Ranma launched himself into the air, and landed safely on the ground, away from Hotaru, who could only
exclaim, "WOW!" Ranma smiled, and bowed to Hotaru. Haruka got her answer when Hotaru Tomoe, a.k.a. Sailor Saturn, ran forward and embraced Ranma. Michiru turned to Haruka, and asked, "I take it that answers your question, Haruka?" Haruka replied, "Yes, it does". Setsuna smiled as the two embraced, though she noticed Ranma Himura had taken note of Hotaru's fragile build, and so was being gentle, and she watched as they kissed. Finally, they broke the kiss, and Hotaru said, "That was fantastic! Can we do it again, please?" Ranma was surprised. "For such a cute girl, you sure have a lot of energy! How about I get us some ice-cream first? And then, if you feel up to it, we'll kiss ageain! Deal?" Setsuna laughed when Hotaru subjected Ranma to the puppy-dog eyes
attack. "AAAAAGGHHH! The dreaded-puppy-dog eyes attack! OK, OK, OK!
A second kiss!" Ranma said, adding, "Don't you ever eat?" The second kiss was much more passionate and sensual. Much to the surprise of Setsuna, Haruka
and Michiru, Hotaru's complexion became healthier, her cheeks gained more colour, and when Ranma and Hotaru came up for air, Setsuna Meioh said, "Hello,
Ranma. I am Setsuna Meioh, and I'd like to thank you for befriending Hotaru, because ahe is very powerful". Ranma was curious to to hear this.
| msvariety chapter 2 . 6/13/2012
not sure how to add my name to the list, but my account name is msvariety.
| Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
this is reall awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
| angel61991 chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
u should really come b 2 this. it sounds like it would b a pretty good story.
| god of all chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon.
| RanmaChaos chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Please update, this sounds like it could be a really great story!
| Tigger-69 chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
Interesting start but, will it be continued?
| SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
| aNON chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
wHAT TAKES U SO LONG TO FINISH. mY SIS IS Killing me.
| 41304 chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
Cool, Not bad . Please post the next chapter soon . I'm looking forword to it
| Kuno-Baby chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
Longer next chapter please!
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
Not a bad start. Formatting is a bit cramped. You
need to expand on the details. Good otherwise.
I like it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
i love your story! you're going to write more soon, right? right? RIGHT? :) question, is Ranma married to Akana? cuz' she's kinda abusive...heh, but that's my take! Later!
| Max Krugman chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
Interestingly, I've seen at least two stories with the EXACT SAME BEGINNING. Since you're not immensely talented, carbon copies of previous fics are a bad idea.