Reviews for Harry Potter and the Staff of Merlin
teenwriter827 chapter 6 . 4/25
I feel like Harry is constantly miscast with the Depression after Serius's death. After all, He didn't know him very well, and Harry has learned to deal with loss. While it's true he would grieve, this depression is so anti-harry it makes it hard to read. I've more than once already thought of putting this down in favor of others simply because of the depression harry.
laserthrasher1 chapter 9 . 4/3
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laserthrasher1 chapter 8 . 4/3
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laserthrasher1 chapter 7 . 4/3
LONGER CHAPTERS! LOOOONNNNGGGGEEEERRRRR
laserthrasher1 chapter 2 . 4/3
MUST. READ. MORE
laserthrasher1 chapter 1 . 4/3
So awesome! :DDD Im glad to find a story with harry being a teacher thats so awesome yaaaay this fanfiction made my day :DD

I think I should take a nap, i've been reading for 2 days without sleep...

Not even kidding...
Guest chapter 23 . 3/9
Professor Vector is a woman and SHE teaches arithmancy. Bathsheba Babbling teaches Ancient runes
martin.presston.9 chapter 17 . 1/7
hi sorry but for a few chapters now i noticed a realy small error you said early in the story and several other times that harry is teaching the 6th years but for the last couple of chapters hes now teaching the 5th years but the new professor is teaching years 1 to 5 and year 7 so i thought id just let you know :)
martin.presston.9 chapter 8 . 1/6
sorry i dont mean to be nasty or negative but why is it that good stories (like this one) are being spoilt by the long authors notes or by answering to inane response from their readers at the end of chapters. i know its fan attention and thats cool but thats what pm is there for again sorry for spouting off and please NEVER write a response to this at the end of a chapter :)) otherwise this is a great story so far thank you
John chapter 21 . 2/1/2015
Harry is being a dick in this chapter. Theres no way to sugarcoat that. Ron stuck by him when he was angsty and the second Ron gets angsty he blows up. Ron had his father for 16 years die. He didnt have time to forge a deep emotional connection with his parents or Sirius. I honestly think Ron has the worst deal here.
TheLordOfTheSea1 chapter 36 . 6/22/2014
Really good story!
Anne chapter 11 . 5/29/2013
Like most of this story but I do not know if I will read any more. I do not want to read about Umbrige. She is foul.
Guest chapter 36 . 9/28/2012
nice writting except you have made a lot of mistakes
Lahnny chapter 36 . 6/9/2012
Hey... nice story! I love it! Can you do a sequel? Please!
InsularFLY chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
wow you're a good writer, brilliant even! :D Can't wait to read more :)
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