|Reviews for Revenge Can Come at Unexpecting Times|
| cflynn214 chapter 12 . 9/28/2005
This was a really good story.. hope there is a sequel
| starryeyes10 chapter 12 . 7/29/2004
| mizukimarr910 chapter 12 . 7/28/2004
what the hell that sucked i mean i liked it but you suck i can;t believe you your just impossible i like my misserable little brother more than you right now. keep writting
NO thanx Mizukimarr910
| littledemonpixie chapter 12 . 7/27/2004
I must have a sequel! You can't Malik get away! I hate it when people leave me hanging but lord knows how many times I've done it in my stories. Other then those demands it was wonderful and I can't wait for more of your great writing. Thanks for the hours of entertainment!
| Abigaile chapter 12 . 7/26/2004
Great story PLZ have a sequla that would be totaly awsome. PLZ
| e-dog chapter 12 . 7/25/2004
cool. nice ending. You've left it open for a sequel. Will there be more?
| Jackia chapter 12 . 7/25/2004
| Wendy Miller chapter 12 . 7/25/2004
Loved the story. You have to write a sequal to this story. It would be great if the bad guy caught up with them while they were on this new assignment.
| jtbwriter chapter 12 . 7/25/2004
That is a great update-but you couldn't resist, could you? (wink, wink!)
Seriously, the grapevine part was extremely cute-and I love that these two know what they need to do.
Sturgis really came through in this story-and I'm glad he gets a day off also.
Thanks for a good read-looking forward to more from you!
| flytoms chapter 12 . 7/25/2004
you can't leave us like that!
ach. good story tho :)
| SpaceMan546 chapter 12 . 7/24/2004
That was an absolutely excellent ending
| me chapter 3 . 7/23/2004
so far, your story's good but OH MY GOD-YOUR SPELLING!Please check over your chapters before posting them. The spelling errors really put a girl off!
| littledemonpixie chapter 11 . 7/20/2004
Holy Cow! Where do I start? These last chapters have been wonderful and full of action and suspense. You MUST post soon or might go crazy! This is great. I'm so glad that I have had the time to read it. I kept thinking about finishing it while I was away from a computor and I am so glad that I have caught up! Anywho you keep writing and I can't wait for the next chapter.
| mizukimarr910 chapter 11 . 7/19/2004
that was great and i think that me and you think alike because i thought that i would be a great idea if someone jumped out of that window and into the pool albeit it's something that i have always wanted to try. this is really good keep writting.
| Jackia chapter 11 . 7/17/2004