Reviews for Twisted
T'LIRA chapter 1 . 5/7
That was fantastic! Way to go Hermione; stick up for your Harry.
thonez chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
Great punishment.
EndlessChains chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
A pretty dark story but amazingly written. Confused at first about what Umbridge was doing but understood as soon as she started thinking to herself. Looks like Harry became the next Dark Lord after Voldemort and is more effective at it if anything else. He instilled fear to all parties rather than choose a group and that is what makes people worry. He psychological part of the story was nicely done. Hermione being an assassin was pretty cool. At least she is physically strong enough to move fast and be able to make Umbridge weep.

The torture was good. It is a nice payback for what she did to her Harry. Well at least he fell in love so he can't be all that Dark in my opinion. I can tell that these two are quite strong and Harry being the strongest. Hermione is quite devious as she put that curse on Umbridge. Gonna have a lot of scars if anything. In a way it was sweet and cute as she did it all for Harry and nothing more. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
meh69 chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
Loveed it! Anyone who writes dark! Hhr is awesome. THANKS again.
Philosophize chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Wow. This is really inventive. Kudos!
The Side Of The Angels In 221B chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Woah...so Umbridge bleeds every time she writes, no matter what quill she uses? AWESOME!
Hi1221 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
God I love these stories. If only you would write the smut... Or continue it. Whichever you like, or you know both would be great too. ;) but this was an awesome one-shot too.
XHush-HushX chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Ooh dark H/Hr...love it of course!
gphoenix51 chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
No less than Umbridge deserves, let the bitch find out what it feels like. I'd be really interested in reading more from this universe, see what happened to everyone else. Did Harry get to kill Dumbles or did he die like he did in Canon?
Separ chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Great little story, Umbitch is always a favorite target ;-)
loonygirl22 chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Oooh dark!HHR! Love it! :) not much darkHHR going around as far as I've seen, do you have recs? :)
serenityselena chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
this is quite another turn than for Harry though not quite an unexpected one after what he had been through during his life
Serad Anon chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
That was adorably evil. Thanks!
alix33 chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Wonderful (IMO anyway) modification of a blood quill's effect Hermione let loose on Umbitch.
Regina Noir chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Wow, it's good

keep writing dark h/hr
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