|Reviews for Temptation|
| Hell Harpie chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
Excellent. Very in character. Too many noobs try to publish stories like this and let the characters feel whatever the author's want them to feel. Nicely done.
| crazy person chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
wow...seems like a good couple i suppose. wow...guess that bulge was driving him a bit crazy, eh? lol
good writing, too. hoping for more chapters?
| Miki292 chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
Marishka is mean. Gotta feel sorry for Velkan. Can't help it actully. Hehehehehehe. I donno why I laughed.
| Dudette chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
I so love your story.
Make more of those Marishka/Velkan shtuff!
| Barbayat chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
that was beautifully written - a very clear image of what was going on appeared in my mind.
Splendid idea by the way and it matches a great deal with what was seen about Dracula and Marishka - that they love to torment their enemies and only see them as little playthings ...
Poor Velkan, I really felt sorry for him, imagining him there beaten on the floor ...
| INMH chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
Hmm... I'm definitely liking the Marishka/Velkan pairing. Are you going to write more stories with this shipping?
| Countess Verona Dracula chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
That was very interesting... and well done. I wouldn't mind seeing more from you.
| Lantern Night chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
I liked that it was good, but please please finish the Covenant!
| dudewheresmyspaceship chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
That was good, but disterbing, but still good, but disturbing, it was goosturbing!